What a wonderful story. So enjoyed Madame Promfrey's part in the story. Lovely ending!

Not really a fan of the story, just personal preference, nothing in particular wrong with it. But I do like how you captured a dog's thought process toward the end. XD

Loved it ! Now onto King's Island :)

I'm loving your storyline and the way that you write the characters and their situations, however I have a small complaint. I've always considered my self to have a decent vocabulary but I'm finding myself needing to google some of the words as I've never heard of them before. For example: milquetoast. Do you really use these words in your everyday speech? As I said I'm loving your work but I'm finding it disrupting to have to keep googling for definitions. That said, I can't wait to keep reading and I've noticed that you've started a sequel and I hope that it'll have more chapters added by the time I'm up to reading it.
Thanks for sharing your time and imagination.

Why is Harry so weak? In the books, he was neglected and mistreated but not in the way you're writing. Besides kids from abusive homes always appear tough and uncaring, not weak and victimy. I know, because I grew up in an abusive home.
Also Snape is so ooc, and so are the slytherin prefects.
But your writing style is amazing. Very descriptive and engaging.

what about Sirius and wormtail? what happened to them?

Truly loved your story! Would love to see more adventures of the Snapes! :)

ch 11 - so heartfelt. Your writing is very engaging, and it flows so well.

Love what I've read so far, looking forwards to reading the rest!
I think one of my favorite things so far is how Draco is portrayed here, that he doesn't unexpectedly stop being the spoiled prat he is without effort or explanation.

Also, love the prefect's name; read it as "Perfect Bollock" until the last paragraph.
Dyslexia is a bitch, but it can be entertaining as well some times.

Very well written with well thought out plot thank you

Thank you for out a great chapter

Lovely bit of plot movement and I love the Poppy Severus romance

Thank you a tear jerking Christmas story

A very imaginative chapter thank you

The national flower of France is a Lily and not an Iris, besides France doesn't really have a nationale flower officially. Lily is more a remain of royalty.
Sinon je trouve que ton histoire est super ! J'ai adoré l'adoption d'Hermione même si je pense que ça va être compliqué pour Draco