VERY nice...will there be a sequal? if not that's ok but you have the bases for a great story here

loved the 'seer' like pictures on harry's wall

also loved the very honest real reaction from severus

very nice

Fantastic Etherian! A really wonderful take on the old "Snape rescues Harry" formula. It's a shame this is only a one shot, because it would make an excellent first chapter for a tale with much wider scope. Good work!

horribly, horribly sad ...

IT WAS A GOOD ONE THANKS HOPE YOU WRITE MORE THANKS

Oh that one good. But I don't understand why Harry had drawn a picture of Snape. He had never seen him.

I would like to see this one continue

Nicely written. I almost wish this wasn't a one shot

this was really sad but i loved the ending! will there be more? please say there will be a next chapter, if not a sequel? :P

This was a good story but it would have been better had Harry's so called family been punished and the Headmaster made to see what his lack of vision and care cost Harry. As Albus never gets punished for all the wrongs he has done to Harry. I look forward to your next story and chapters.

This is a great story. I know you said it was a one-shot, but I think you should continue it. You are a very talented writer and I really enjoy your stories. Please keep up the good work.

This is lovely. Is it just a one-shot or will you be continuing it?

DM