|Reviews for antiquity|
| thepiratejilt chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
I was about to tell you almost exactly what you said in your authors note- canononically (lol :l) incorrect, but BETTER than canon :D - but... then i read your authors' note.
all i have to say it..
aljflksdjfksdjfskj no words to describe how much i love this.
at first i was like, "His family or his stories. To Maechen, the choice is obvious," O_o dayum, maechen! xD but i was glad to see that his family didn't totally reject him, even if that was kind of a douche move.
it wouldn't be maechen any other way, though.
you did such an amazing job of humanizing and adding depth to him. definite new favorite.
i hope you write more in ffx- it could use something that isn't a self insert or other random talentless crap, lolol :)
| Auron's Legend chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
A wonderfully original concept and just beautifully written! Congratulations!
| Kikyaru360 chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
This was absolutely wonderful!
I don't even mind the improvised family of his. Actually it may have been possible depending on how long ago he had said wife and children, but it's hard to know how long someone can stay unsent before they eventually go.
I really enjoyed this.
| can I have a new username chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
this was beautiful... needs more reviews... 'fave'