Reviews for The Dark Angel
H.M chapter 7 . 5/27
Please don't listen to that nasty reviewer, you write lovely fan fictions.
H.M chapter 5 . 5/27
I understand the Harry and Draco room thing me and my sister use to do the same thing
Guest chapter 22 . 11/24/2016
Great story. But Tom should kill victor. I'm not sure but Blake hating his father feels wrong and selfish. He would know it's all dumbledores fault and that Harry wouldn't be happy without Tom. Harry and Tom have a child together and history. He wouldn't feel like he is divided between Tom and victor. So Tom kills victor Harry forgives him. But like I said Blake hating his father is wrong
1414artemis14 chapter 22 . 8/17/2016
Wow great another Rick Riordan
crimson blood king chapter 22 . 8/9/2016
this story needs a sqeul or another chapter because cliffhangers suck its also a good way to piss people off of inless there family then it comes natreally.i don't mean to sound sorry if I mom tought me to be blunt.
Guest chapter 22 . 3/6/2016
Wy u do Dat wyyyyyyy
Seriously why that's so mean
But Still great story
And fu** u
roseapplelovesflowers chapter 7 . 12/21/2015
love your story so far! please keep giving your best to all your other stories to!
Noxaura Cille chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
I...am disgusted that you won't allow us to HELP YOU!

I cannot read a story that hurts my brain. Sorry.

~Nox [irritated]
Noxaura Cille chapter 21 . 12/16/2015
I'm very sorry, but you need a beta, or a spell-checker, or something. The grammar is off, and it physically and mentally hurts me to read stories like these. Great idea! ~Nox
Pigglet chapter 22 . 10/7/2015
Nice story
cb chapter 22 . 3/1/2015
Wow! That was great
Abbey Whitlock chapter 22 . 2/20/2015
well, that was a stupid ending, I'm sure two dominates would love to share. Way to truly botch a great story with two paragraphs, jeez.
twinia1 chapter 22 . 1/15/2015
I LOVED this story but the end is just horrible.
I mean adding someone else in the mix is just stupid and de way Blake hates his father means that the kid has not been raised well.

I wish you would have ended the story differently because it was good.
Guest chapter 22 . 12/30/2014
I like this story but I don't like the ending you leave it on a cliffhanger and have no sequel
This isn't what it looks like chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
...I don't know how you got 302 reviews without at least ONE person who pointed out the obvious spelling mistake in your summary, it is "he's" not "HIS" god, I hate to go grammer police, but I just felt like cat who's fur was being rubbed the wrong way...with a sharp shaving knife...in the hands of a nine year old.
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