Reviews for Five Missing Pieces
W0lf-Spirit chapter 3 . 2/16/2013
Haha druggedhigh Neal is adorable and hilarious.
Crystalzap chapter 5 . 2/14/2013
Not bad all those little scenes you don't see
BlueDiamondStar chapter 5 . 11/8/2012
awww so cute. how they actually care for each other but still cannot admit it.
BlueDiamondStar chapter 3 . 11/8/2012
That was so hilariously funny and adorably cute!
I don't remember much from episode but from YT vids I know the needle was HUGE. And it really looked like it could go through Neal's arm.

And that song... I could hear Matt singing it in my mind from that other vid.
ferryboat George chapter 5 . 11/28/2011
Delightful MS
Harm Marie chapter 5 . 10/17/2011
Loved this.
canadianscanget chapter 2 . 10/7/2011
So like the last line. ccg
Kiki Cabou chapter 5 . 8/4/2010
The perfect finish. I'm so glad you found the last piece to add to this collection. Great job! :-)
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 4 . 8/4/2010
love it!
Tara Walden chapter 5 . 8/4/2010
AW! Such a great chapter. I love it. _

AFictionalWriter chapter 5 . 8/4/2010
I was wondering when you were going to update this ;) I really enjoyed this chapter, you gave a great insight into both of their heads. I look forward to reading more from you :D
MaraudingSnitch1314 chapter 5 . 8/4/2010
A fantastic tag to "By the Book" (a fantastic episode). I was curious as to why Peter never yelled at Neal for breaking into a bad guy's cigar bar, and I like how you addressed the Peter/Neal vs. Neal/Mozzie relationships. Well-written; I think you nailed it! )
Kiki Cabou chapter 4 . 6/2/2010
I thought all four of these were equally brilliant in their own way. You have this well-crafted quartet of four different moods, and each piece has clearly drawn and shaded to the last detail. It's really terrific. Also, the dialogue in all of them sounds like it was lifted from the show. It's incredible! It's like I'm watching it happen. My personal favorite was "The One Where Neal Expresses," because that whole thing with them escaping the clinic was just begging for a written expansion, and here it is. :D

One question: where's the fifth one? 'Cause, you know, the title is Five Missing Pieces. I suppose if you don't want to write another vignette then you could just change it to Four Missing Pieces, but I really hope there's one more coming. The Story Alert is just in case that happens. ;-)
lelann37 chapter 4 . 2/26/2010
i love this! and Peter upset for Neal's honor-too funny! thanks for sharing
NJD-NW-GG-E-HP chapter 4 . 2/24/2010
love this chapter it made me smile the whole way through :P
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