Reviews for Artificial Light
Braelyn Rae chapter 3 . 5/9/2010
Interesting, can't wait to read more!
Space Foxes chapter 3 . 5/9/2010
Ooh!

Write more soon!
Leah Stubbs chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
oh my gosh, this is awesome! ive only read the first bit, but seriously, its so gripping already! :)
NRZWolf 13 chapter 2 . 4/10/2010
YAY funniness :)

I like the way this is shaping up but... I thought Amy was a kiss-o-gram

before. Not a LEO (Law Enforcement Officer) ( watch WAY too much NCIS) do I get my 'time-lord-on-top' now? I'll give you cookies as an exchange :)
Timey chapter 2 . 2/23/2010
Wow, I find this very intriguing! Yeah, Eleven definitely sounded like Ten there, but if this is soon after the regeneration I'd expect his head to still be in a jumble. I also applaud anyone brave enough to write for Eleven/Amy when we still know practically nothing about them.

I do agree with the previous reviewer. I'd rethink putting all the dialogue in italics. Other than that, I'm eager to see what happens next.
Kesomon chapter 2 . 2/18/2010
Hm. It might be a good story, I'll keep an eye on it. One thing though - you're making all the spoken words italic? It's really distracting and makes it difficult to read. Might want to change that.