|Reviews for This bed will never quite be full|
| LadyTrish chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
your story has turned me into an unrecognizable puddle of mush...that was just to wonderful to put into words...thank you for sharing...I loved it!
| LunaZola chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
He wears his badge on his sleeve and his heart in his pants. She wears a gun on her hip and absolutely nothing else
- Most amazing line ever. Seriously.
You like to write the tragicness of words never spoken, don't you? If they would just unzip their lips... hm. Great little one shot. So straight to the point, leaving unnecessary details out of it; that makes it so raw.
| ericajane chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Wow... very good!
| indiaga chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
You amaze me. This is beautiful and makes me want to cry. Nothing is perfect, but this might be.
| Mooncombo chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Wow. Just wow. I loved that. Very powerful.
-He wears his badge on his sleeve and his heart in his pants. She wears a gun on her hip and absolutely nothing else-
Love this. So, so good.
| djEskimo chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
This is truly fantastic! Excellent work!
| Betherzz chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
its a good one shot. thanks :)
| alice in a coma chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Perfection. I loved the last two lines.
| n0pe chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Wow. This is so beautiful, you always seem to find the right words in every sentence. I love the parts:
"The silent martyr who won't shut up."
"They get the killer. He gets a broken nose and she gets a split lip. They both ooze blood for hours afterwards."
"He wears his badge on his sleeve and his heart in his pants. She wears a gun on her hip and absolutely nothing else."
Just plain beautiful.
| zatl chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
This was very well written.
| Ink On Paper chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Once again, too beautiful for words. Magnificent.
| GeekLoveFan chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Oh. Excellent. Very excellent. So visceral.
There were many parts I loved, but the line about "fifty rules and one green dress" laying in a pudde at her feet was just...perfection.