Reviews for First Step
Toaofwriting chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
I hope everything got resolved okay for you. Great job.
Aww chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
omg so sweet I wanna die!
So fricken sweet and cute and fluffy!
I love ur style of writing... very... descriptive. :D
Keep up the great work! XOXOXO
alskdjfslkjafljsdk chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Good job! :)
tenoh27 chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
A very lovely read, and you captured Neville very well. Frankly, from my perspective, I found the friendship within the Trio very lacking. What glued them together was dangerous adventures because as a Hermione-fan, I am really not sure what Ron and Harry offered Hermione in terms of friendship. Hermione would have been much better off as good friends with Neville and Luna, because I am sure they would never overlook her or make fun of her.

I love your exposition about friendships and the need for communication in them, very insightful.

Thank you very much.
q.thews chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
And this is even the first step for the new, improved seventh year Neville we got to see in DH.

Well done.

Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
So deep.