|Reviews for Oceans Away|
| Emma chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
Hey I'm really loving this so far please please please can u write more and quickly I've been checking for a while now nd still there is not more chapters but I'm sure when you do get another canter done it will be great
Thanks a lot
Please write quick
| Emma chapter 2 . 3/22/2013
hey, this sounds so good its amazing i cant wait to read more
i was just think maybe for the future or in this story you could make something out of this little idea i had
well jack could have a daughter whos very pretty and smart but a real fiery personalty maybe a bit stubborn but has got real charisma and is the life and soul of every party but her mother died from child birth and jack and his daughter where heart broken as jack truly loved his wife and vowed he would never love another woman apart from his daughter who was his pride and joy again. but after many years he sees a very pretty young woman who he has been introduced to. people are starting to talk about jack and how he should be married as it is the proper thing to do, get married again have a son and then an air to his fortune so a greedy man with a very pretty daughter says that he would happily aloud his daughter to marry him as he knew that as thier money was running out a new lot would be coming in from the Aubreys. jack says he will think about it, he knew he needed an air and a wife more now then ever but he always thought you should marry for love not to fit in soon jacks daughter finds out and is heart broken and angry that her father could even think about married someone he didnt love just to replace mum and what didnt help is that the woman he intended to marry as only a a couple years older than her. jacks daughter is 17 and jacks future wife is 25. this could cause a lot of trouble. i dunno maybe you could use some of that or something its up to you
please write more to this story soon cant wait to read it
| Old Gregg93 chapter 2 . 12/19/2010
I really like this story so far, please update soon!
| Wayne Downey chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
I loved the movie - and so far you're doing justice to the main characters... why stop? So many people out there who don't have such imagination or even the motivation to write...
bet it'll be a great story -
| ClaudiaForever chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Hey I love your story and I don't care if itsn't historically corect. Please continue ! (sorry for my english, I'm french)
| Pierre Gringoire chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
There's a big issue with the basic plot. You recall that the Surprise was off the coast of Brazil when the Acheron attacked, right? Well it would have taken a lot more than five days to reach California. This was pre Panama canal. They would have had to sail around the southern tip of South America and all the way up to California. It would have taken weeks. Furthermore, why on Earth would they sail to California at all? It was held by Spain, and in 1805, Spain was allied with France. They'd be sailing to an enemy port. In the meantime, what do they intend to do about the Acheron?