Reviews for Hedwig's Great Adventure |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far, but it needs to be finished, darn you... oh well, I'll follow and favorite this just in case you decide to work on this story again... |
![]() ![]() daphne greengrass is like hermione jsut because the malfoys and weasleys hate each other doesnt mean that everyone would hate the weasleys |
![]() ![]() not all slytherins are evil daphne greengrass rab regulus black snape not vil in the end it isnt mentioned what are the requirements to be a death eater though hmm rape murder kidnap drug many fanfictions |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can’t end it there! What happens?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Need another update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Falling in love with this story! Updates pleaseee |
![]() ![]() ![]() I doubt there would be any wizarding primary schools. Wizarding families seem very traditional and so would have raised and educated their own children like, y'know, actual parents instead of passing them off to strangers to be raised all day. Hogwarts is a different matter because of, ironically, tradition. That tradition probably became such as families would be able to get their children out of the way of new children being born and nurtured without those older kids being neglected. Essentially creating an efficient production line of wizards and witches. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Ron thinks of dealing with his Housemates as being like chess, he'll become king of Slytherin overnight and have taken over the wizarding world behind the scenes by the end of the next day. Perhaps a week for global domination. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I recorded Hedwig's Great Adventure and had't listen to it till today. It's great, I just went to find posts beyond chapter 17. was sorry you rewrote it only to chapter 12. BOO. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do wish you would continue the story. I really enjoyed what you were able to put out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay... I did not see this coming |
![]() ![]() Noooo, unfinished! This is great, I hope you come back and finish it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you finish this! I was really enjoying it! |
![]() ![]() Yes, but Pettigrew... Why is he... Why? I mean he started working for Voldemort, and the dark mark disappeared when Voldemort died... So not having the dark mark isn’t much proof, though I suppose Sirius wouldn’t know this. Is this just an off-cannon part of the story? It’s fine I guess, but he still murdered all those people right? What about that line that the muggles heard about Sirius being guilty? Did that not happen? Also Pettigrew was supposed to be Percy’s rat before hand, and was with the family for years after coming into their garden so that doesn’t make much sense... Sorry I just really hate the rat, I don’t like the idea of him being a ‘good guy.’ Ya know? On a brighter note I liked some of your other changes from cannon. Hedwig is my favorite Lol. (((: |