Reviews for A Father's Pride
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3
Plis! continued! Amazing!
DarkEcoFreak chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Aw that was SAD! But I loved it! I love Damas centered things and this ones great!
PrayerGirl chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
This was very well written and you are very good! This made me so sad! Great job!
M-Angel 05 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Wow! I love the story, but can you continue this? Like everything Damas thought or said during Jak 3 that nobody hear or knew and his worries for his city, son and Jak. I love the story but it has SO much potenial to be even better!
didi chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Oh my...please make this a story. It has potential to be a great story!
Ephriokko chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Ah man... the whole situation that had been revealed regarding Damas & Jak was always heartwrenching to me. Such cruel irony.

Those feelings all came rushing back when I read this: Feelings of cruel irony. This is very well-written, and it really feels like Damas is the one narrating this.

All I've got to say is... good job. Good job.
LeiaOrganicSolo chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
wow. just wow.

you got completely inside damas's head, and i LOVED IT!

great job, you portrayed the strong sense of protection damas has for jak perfectly!