This fix is great! I love how Bella is smart, independent and ambitious. She’s so much more like book Bella here!

Seriously tho, this was actually so much better than canon. Ugh.

In the earlier chapters, there were some grammar and formatting issues but honestly- this was 1000x better than Smeyer's version. This is my Canon from now onthis Bella who never gave up on Edward and chased him like her life depended on it was EVERYTHING and bless you for giving it to us. I will read this ten thousand times over before I ever pick up the actual series again. You are an artist and we but humble servants of your masterpiece. Thank you for giving the world your talent for fixing everything in this series.

Honestly it seems like Bella is giving up any dreams or wants she has for Edward. I mean he doesn't want to try and all of a sudden it's okay that's fine no matter what I want your opinion matters more. That's not compromising that's settling.

I really needed a distraction and this story certainly delivered.
Thank you so very much.

the best day differferent ending of twilight I've ever read. really live it. thank you so much

Best twilight fic EVER

I read the story before a long time ago, and it was just as amazing this time! I so loved all of the little memory blips. It’s just so fun to see so many moments of normal life outside of the main storyline. Seriously one of the best twilight fanfics out there! Thank you for taking the time to share this with all of us.

Thank you for this wonderful story

I have read all of your stories now and I will miss them so much. Of course, I can always re-read them... but there is nothing like the first time. You have set the bar so high with your work that I don’t know if any other author will ever meet my new standards. Thank you so sharing your talent.

One chapter in and already this is on the best of AU Bella/Edward.
Another hit. Yiu are a marvelous writer.

I just love the way you write emotions, they are so real.

I don’t know how many years ago you wrote this but I just screamed!

I enjoyed every second of it!

Oh my goodness, this chapter was so good. I can’t believe I found this, the 4th of July memory was so beautiful and heart wrenching. I’m looking forward to the next chapters but I just wanted to say this is really well done!