Reviews for Distractions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit! I was worried something like this would happen, given his snooping around and his father's "hobby." xo Nan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah ha! Finally some potential! It wouldn't surprise me if Edward gave the jacket and car away because hr could smell Bella in them or even if they just reminded him of her. xo Nan P.S. Hope you're doing well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I perked up when I saw Hunky Dory. It's still my favorite Bowie album and "Life on Mars" is my favorite Bowie song. Bella is one clever girl! Or maybe that's the , I would have read this long ago, but I didn't realize I hadn't read all of your stories. I'm working on correcting that Nan |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was told by Suebee and TrinaSmisic that I absolutely had to read this story. So glad I listened! I had hoped something like this would happen when I was reading the original. Thank you for thinking of this and doing something about it! xo Nan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for this I enjoyed this version of the events so much! I even dare to say I prefer this over the actual thing haha I love your vision of Edward and how both him and Bella grow so much as the story goes, I love how they finally understand and learn how to respect each other! This is incredible I LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed a lot with your story. Thanks for your time Regards LQUEZ |
![]() ![]() I don't think any other new moon fic could ever even come close to the brilliance and beauty of distractions...i simply love it, thank you for writing and sharing it with the world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved , would you consider an epilogue with the pregnancy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved every chapter, thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel I should point this out: Romeo and Julliet is not a romance, let alone THE romantic story. It's actually a tragedy, the tragedy of two lovers so wrapped up in their passion that they prefeered death to the possibility of separation. If you consider that romantic, more power to you, but no high school teacher worth their salt would talk of it as a romance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() noooo that cant be it! what about the rest?! such a great version. absolutely loved this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really loved this story. And how she set about trying to find him. I also believe that Edward would have got Victoria much sooner than SM wrote. Really like your own character Callum. this is definitely on my favourites list. I want to check out your other stories, but then I'm going to read this one again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am re-reading this now and it is still so beautifully written fanfiction. Makes my heart sing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() Such a beautiful story! The resilience, growth, and the strength shown in both Bella and Edward is just spectacular. I'm so glad that I found this gem. Thank you for sharing! |