Reviews for Distractions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Such a different approach to the baby thing Very clever I live how excited they are about the house Edward is adukting for the first time ! Lol Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that it was inky 3 months apart I like that Bella learnt and matured during that time I think Edward is responding to that change Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m reading so ferociously I’m not reviewing much But please be assured I am loving this I Janet read canon in awhile Btw this one and bloodlines Swoon Loving it Thank you so much for putting yourself out there I appreciate it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh why hasn’t she tried the hospital in Chicago They have a web site site . Ah I’m sure she’s get there Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is the story i wanted the original to be. thank you so much for sharing 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Couldnt stop reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, my name is Nathália and I want to ask you a big favor! Your Fanfic Distractions is without a doubt my favorite! Even better than the original story. The point is that I can not stop reading it and I always have the expectation that there will be a continuation or even a one-shot of it. So if possible could you continue with this fanfic? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I'm sorry I didn't turn back the first time you called me." This made my lower lip tremble :((( and again further down the lines. IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL my eyes are teary. Edward remembering the doom day, my heart ached... I loved the joke with Jasper & Emmet and the ending... Oh the ending... It's so sweet and lovely and omg it's PERFECT! Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this! It's been an amazing two days being in this story, I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The truuuuckkkk! I love your idea, it's lovely :) and I love that you wrote from Edward's perspective. Loved the changing after the wedding idea too. Have I said I love this chapter? :)))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Most people think about it, I just say it." This made me laugh out loud again :) I always wished SMeyer would have finished Midnight Sun and wrote at least a few chapters of NM from Edward's perspective. I LOVE that you did, thank you! That scene in the woods from his view and on his return... it was lovely. Tragical, but lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love the skip in the months! Like a little scene of each thing :) I am loving that you're keeping close to the canon stuff too (about the wedding). Loooveeee the land idea too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was sooooo nervous starting this chapter... I even had the knot in my throat. I am SO glad Edward offered. SO GLAD! This chapter ended perfectly, loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhh! I loved Rosalie's entrance! Actually made me laugh out loud :))) I am SOOOO glad Edward's seeing things clear! I wish this story would never end! You are remarkable, this story is amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love love loooveeee you gave Charlie a bigger voice, to say more. I didn't think he was given the chance to say everything in the books. I know Edward reads minds, but Bella needed to hear her dad's opinion. Not just about the nightmares, but the heartache he went through seeing his child like that and not being able to help. Amazing, as always :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been all goosebumps half of this chapter. Amazing is cutting it short. I LOVED it! My favourite book is New Moon beacuse of the pain and emotions and angst, but I have to say, this AU is just amazing. I can honestly (hand on heart) say I love it more than NM! |