|Reviews for Distractions|
| projectviviana chapter 2 . 3/26/2010
I LOVE THE DAVID BOWIE FLASHBACK!
It was so cute!
Omg I could kiss Jessica too! lol
Can't wait to read more :)
- Vicki xoxo
| alisa231 chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
You're doing a nice job playing with the suspense element in this story. You've left a lot of clues -Callum's presence, for example. I'm intrigued to see how everything will tie together.
I'm enjoying your use of Charlie, as well. He doesn't have a major role, but you're using him effectively nonetheless. I like that he brought up college with Bella -it seemed that Edward was the only one with that concern in the books.
The flashback was so good, so heartfelt. I think I've said this before, but these flashbacks make Bella's loss so palpable. They also show Bella's progress -the mere fact that she's able to remember her time with Edward fondly and look back and see the love he had for her is a big step.
And the woman...my first thought was Tanya or Kate (she's a blonde too I think), but I'm also wondering if it could be Rosalie. I think the Cullens did spend some time in Alaska during NM, and it'd be more plausible for Edward to lend his clothes/car to his sister than to Tanya. I'm not sure but regardless...I'm enjoying this very much. Thanks.
| thinkb4uact chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
I really hope Bella doesn't over react that another women is in his car or wearing his jacket. I am realy looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next after that last bit of news.
| dawntwilight000 chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
Poor Bella. I say she just kicks Eddie A** when she finds him! A women wears Edward coat. That can't be good
| TheMagicLampshade chapter 2 . 3/22/2010
Loving the story so far, I can't wait for an update!
| LostPrincess94 chapter 2 . 3/21/2010
about last chapter... maybe edward or another one of the cullens was trying 2 call bella those times that the phone rang, but bella didn't get there in time. hm... just a thought... i 3 this chapter! i hope that bella's plan works & that alice calls her back. please update soon! :)
| LostPrincess94 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
i 3 it! how new moon should have been written! i 3 bella's strength & determination! please update soon! :)
| Manna1 chapter 2 . 3/17/2010
Really good, keep writing! Nice idea about finding a person through magazine subscriptions...just might try that!
| over-dramatic87 chapter 2 . 3/17/2010
Wow this story is going to be fantastic! Two chapters in and I am hooked! I loved Blood Lines and I know I am going to love this just as much. I love the AU twist and how Bella sent a message to Alice through Vogue. Genius!
Can't wait for more :)
| 4everhis91 chapter 2 . 3/16/2010
I am still so excited about this story and cant wait to read more. I love the Bowie flashback. I am not sure how the new student is going to play a part but I kn ow there will be something exciting. I am so glad u are going with this route. It always bothered me that Bella didnt try to find them. I mean there are many ways and her Dad's a cop... she could sneack and use some of his resources too. Plus Dr. Cullen would have to be reg. for his lic or he would have never been working at a hospital. There is endless ways to track someone down even if they have covers. This is a great start. Update soon :)
| 4everhis91 chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
I am so thankful to see ur alert! This is going to be a fantastic story! I have missed u and ur characters and versions of E&B. I often think of George and re-read my favorite parts :) I hope all is well for u and look forward to even more chapters :)
| CollMom chapter 2 . 3/16/2010
This is a really great concept for a vamp E/B story. I'm looking forward to more!
| iamawickedchild chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
I forgot to add: I LOVE ths back stories of Edward and Bellas time together! it made me smile every time i picture them together like that, so easy and full of tender moments and smiles and so lovely! GAH! cant wait for more! :)
| iamawickedchild chapter 2 . 3/16/2010
OMG OMG! im actually shaking from excitament!
I just found this story on Twilighted forum AU and started reading at work and now im behind work hehe! but it was so worth it! :)
I alredy LOVE this Bella! and in ff world thats hard to find, i love how driven she is, is very inspiring!
I cant wait for the next chapter! and thank you for making them so long! i apreciate that! :)
| dazzled eyes22 chapter 2 . 3/15/2010
I loved how you weave Bella's memories from their happy time together over that summer. I have never seen a fan fic use that time. This particular memory was really cute. I loved the romance between Edward and Bella while they spoke about music and the humor that came when Emmett attempted to take his car against his wishes. It also quite funny when Edward realized that Bella's mother had similar musical tastes which made him feel old. I loved that Bella used a gift subscription to Vogue to contact Alice.