|Reviews for Distractions|
| sportress chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
wow i love the detective work Bella is doing!
| LadyExcalibur2010 chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
Sneaky, stalker Bella. I love it! You go girl, get your vampire back where he belongs!
| mysinger chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
I enjoyed this chapter even more than the first. I like how you had Bella start to think about memories of Edward now that they are no longer off limits to her, and how she moved from self-pity to worrying about Edward and how he must be hurting.
| Twerd1853 chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
YAY! I'm so glad you finally updated. God, I hope she finds them, and finds them soon! I'm almost willing to just ask you to skip over how she found him and just get straight to the reunion part haha I can't wait to read more!
| PenName76 chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
You are a crafty one, Chymes, a crafty one! I have been waiting on pins and needles for this chapter and you did not disappoint! The Vogue subscription idea was genius and very creative. I am absolutely loving this story and cannot wait until the next chapter. Congrats on another great job!
| Twilight-Alagaesia chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
Thanks for the update ! will be waiting for next chapters... hope you update soon... good story, would love to read some EPOV too!
| girl-crazy-4-VampyreSpeed chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
you have to update! your story is really good!
i can't wait for the next chapter
| ebhg chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
Very cool. Who knew Bella could be sneaky enough to use Vogue to find Alice? I thought that was very fresh and unique. Can't wait for more!
| starla1979 chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
Can I just say that I love your Bella? I am guessing that she will be the same one we saw in Bloodlines right? I think I told that what i loved most about Bloodlines was that you gave me the Bella and Edward I wanted to see in BD. You presented the evolution of their relationship beautifully and we got to see them become true partners and equals and not just lovers. You even gave us a great resolution with Jacob and not a cop-out involving an imprint on a baby. I can't even go back to the original saga now that I have read your work and YborJen's.
But back to this story. I get the feeling we are going to see the evolution of Bella I wanted to see in NM and probably ignoring some of the events in Eclipse. Is this a prequel to Bloodlines? I will still read evey chapter of Distractions regardless. I am anxious to see Bella's strength and determination and of course, the reunion. It looks like she will once again heal Edward. I am so glad I put you on my alert b/c honestly, I will read anything you write :-). Keep up the good work!
| packermom chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
Great update! I'm really looking forward to see where you go with this story. I'm sure it will be great. Nothing really ever compares to my all timne favorite, Blood Lines. I just love how you develop the characters.
| MessyBar chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
Looking forward to what's coming next. Can really feel her desperation and resolve at the same time. Glad she's not giving up and understands what he really did. Hopefully the note/gift will get to Alice and she will help Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| mad4hugh chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
Smart girl (what I should say is "smart and clever writer"). Clever sending the message via the subscription - I wonder if Alice saw her descision. Hm.
I like Bella's memories if her times with Edward - brava! I think they are very keeping with the Bella of the books...sometimes Bella in ff canon-AU stories is so different. Not that I mind, just happy to read one so reminiscent of the books.
Can't wait for the next installment to see if/what type of reaction this one simple act results in.
| Capricorn75 chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
This chapter was the best start to my day! Your writing just cozies up to me and makes me feel all warm and comforted, even when it's a sad scene.
I had a feeling that somehow the Vogue subscription was going to be the first clue for Bella. I had visions of her calling and pretending to be Alice and complaining about not receiving her issues, but didn't know how she would get past the whole privacy/not giving out the address thing. Of course you came up with a MUCH better idea!
The flashback to listening to David Bowie with Edward was so great. In both your stories you created such a warm and deep relationship between B&E. What I like best is that it's not just a romantic relationship, but a true friendship as well. I think the majority of authors just focus on the romance aspect, but you flesh everything else and give them that friendship that a successful couple should to make their relationship even better.
Sorry for rambling...needless to say I could fangirl over you all day :-)
| dani7603 chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
oo i love it
and wow bellas smart ordering a suspriciton to vogue and inclding a msg i would of never thought og that
keep up the great work
| LizzySwan1022 chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
Okay, so this is utterly beyond amazing! More as soon as possible please!