Reviews for Distractions
Twilights1Fan chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
OMG thats an awful place to leave us hanging. Shame on you.~.*.~. I'm just joking. I really like this story. You're a very talented writer. I am so sad that she is without Edward.

I am glad that you threw in a twist from the original story and had her make an effort to search for him. Actually I love all the different events, memories and people from the original story. I really hope she finds him. I guess if she finds the Denali clan, she may also find out things she didn't want to find out.

I can only guess that the tall beautiful woman is Tanya and that makes me upset that she is wearing Edward's coat. I am so upset. first of all they don't need to wear coats because they are just for appearance sake and the fact that she chose Edward's coat makes it more a slap in the face to Bella. I hope that Bella gets more links to Edward.

I don't think that Edward is with Tanya though because it just isn't his style to be with her or even take her as his mate when his heart and soul belongs to Bella. I can see Alice giving the coat to Tanya and sending her that way knowing that Bella would be there to catch that bread crumb. This way she wouldn't have betrayed Edward's trust not to contact Bella directly.

I also am very curious as to who is driving the familiar car? What car is it exactly, there were several cars that the Cullen's owned? Oh I really hope that you plan to continue this awesome tale. I really would love to read more and see if Bella is successful in finding Edward before she ages even more than him.

Yes they mighty get the chance to be together but it would be tragic if she was older than him. She might be mistaken for his mother not his lover. That would just bite. LOL

I hope she is very close to Edward and finding him. Great freaken story. Thanks!

Twerd1853 chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
you CAN NOT leave us with just that! oh my god, please update soon. this story is getting better and better, and from your previous stories i know you won't disappoint us :)
84gemstone chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
OMG Please tell me Edward is in Anderson

With the Denali vampires and Bella can stop would a vamp need Edawrd's jacket? Cant wait to read more
Bonfire93 chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
Update soon, please.

This chapter was very good.
84gemstone chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
where to start looking?
CynicalDreamerC chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
:0! Oh, please, fricken please update soon! I'm dying over here..

Great chapter!.. :)
jerseyhalliwell chapter 3 . 3/27/2010

you did not just stop there!
joayla chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
Mike Newton of all people! And the cliffy how could you do that to us! really clever chapter!
fara1903 chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
Patience is not one of my virtue...sorry I'm dying to know who the woman is and whether Bella will find Edward in Alaska or seems like an impossible task when she doesn't have enough information about him...
girl-crazy-4-VampyreSpeed chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
i really want to know who it was now...

was it Tanya?

Please update soon


jdmom29 chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
Hhm...could she be Tanya? Can't wait to find out!
DancingInMyUnderwear chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
Holy crap much? I wasn't expecting that at all. Great surprise at the end there. Although I have to say that Edward better be emo somewhere and not hanging around with other vampires otherwise I may just have to beat him up lol. Another great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!
LostPrincess94 chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
y did the chapter have to end there! ug! let me guess... tanya? probably unless its a twist & she's hallucinating or its just a big coincidence... not likely! lol :) i hope that edward wasn't an idiot & decided 2 drown his sorrows by hooking up with tanya! ... tho it might be interesting 2 read... hm... idk. please update soon! :)
moniquecullen chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
Oh snap, let me guess, is it Tanya?
cheddah chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
I am so excited abt this fic!

I wonder if the woman is Tanya? Hm...

TY for writing a proactive B!

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