Reviews for Everything You Are
ArcadianMaggie chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
This was absolutely lovely! I saw on twitter someone saying this was their favorite o/s, so thought I'd check it out. Yes, not only am I reading het, I'm reading Bella/Jacob (mostly) het! lol. I've seen the Peter Pan/Edward comparison before, but I can say with certainty that I've never seen it done better. I teared up! Loved it. xoxo
MsInnsane chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Oh. Just oh. That made me well up good and proper! It was also the first anything I've read with JacobxB and I think I could probably read more. Always loved that line in Hook, too. Lovely xx
twi nana chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Really wonderful story, and go Bella!
Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarches chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
"You—you know that place between sleep and awake? The place where you remember dreaming?"

Edward closed his eyes, his lips parting slightly as tears continued to trail down his face. He nodded slowly.

"That's where I'll always love you, Edward,"

"That's where I'll be waiting,"

Oh...My...God... I am crying so hard!

I love that Bella was happy with Jake, but this conversation with Edward? Absolutly broke my heart... : (

Such a painfully beautiful one-shot hun : )
readergoof chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
my God that was saddly beautiful

i hope the banner I am making is half of what it is
Kimmydonn chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
awwww, I great team threesome story. Loved it!
rosygloss chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
I love that you are branching out and finding your voice-everything you write is a treat to read, as always. 3 Can't wait to see what you do next!
TwiTwin1 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Wow. I loved this story. Peter Pan has always been a favorite story of mine, and the way it was used here almost made me job.
evenflo78 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
OMG! That was wonderfully sweet and sad at the same time. I loved it. It was tears and smiles, love and hate. Beautiful job. I loved that quote. Tinkerbell and Peter Pan...a really good reference. Great job love!
Batgirl8968 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I loved this so much! you did SUCH a great job on it! Definitely cried when B & E said goodbye...the thimble thing? Yeah, that did me in. Completely. You did a brilliant job with the quote...gah...Best part? You actually made Bella & Jacob believable-and moreso than Bella & Edward. I just loved this so much! 3 I'm glad you actually wrote it! :) ily!
VanPireNZ chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
It's so much better every single time I read it. It makes me actually like Bella for being able to stand up and say no.

Just beautifully done. xoxo
Lilacs46 chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
I liked the story in general, but have to admit I had a hard time accepting Bella being with Jacob. For some reason I cringe when I read fics of them together. lol
punkfarie chapter 1 . 2/19/2010


very good. well written.

even though it was Jacob. :P
arden8283 chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
What a beautiful story - I teared up a little at times especially the night before the wedding. I loved the lines, "My half was weaker, more prone to pain and hurt—easy to love and be loved, more apt to break and be broken. But together, we were whole. We were perfect." Heartbreaking, but beautiful. Great job! Thanks!
SunKing chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Oh, curse you for making me cry. I always want Bella and Edward together, but somehow you made it okay that they weren't. Just knowing that they always had that tiny piece of each other eases the pain. I don't have that experience of young love. Of course, in my youthful ignorance, I was sure that I had found it many times. But there's no one in my past that owns a piece of my heart. No one of whom I have fond remembrances and for whom I have nostalgic feelings. Almost always, I am glad that I do not; that my husband has all of me. This once, though... This once, I wish I had that experience, so that I could relate to Bella even more fully.

My cat is looking at me like I'm crazy because I'm sniffling. Damn you.
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