Reviews for Logia Luffy: Yami edition
Talon of soaring Eagle chapter 9 . 6/10
Just here to say how much I love your metaphors XD The way you find an explanation for everything while pointing out some other glaringly obvious plot holes is just amazing I swear, and also if Buggy kept his knives inside of him then shouldn't his hand just have exploded into blood from the power being sucked out of it?
amerdism chapter 9 . 1/28
Awesome, I hope to see more soon
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
Well he does the potential learn all of luffy's gomu gomu techniques, which are all well known to take out even the most powerful of pirates in that age, add gear second, gear third and haki, to his arsenal, and I'd say that if he makes an attempt he could still become king of the pirates, albeit with a power that doesn't suit him.
R .D. T chapter 9 . 10/3/2014
i hope his bounty is higher than in original. PLEASE UPDAteeeeeeee
R .D. T chapter 8 . 10/3/2014
ok whats with the ending? is it aokiji? or smoker?
R .D. T chapter 7 . 10/2/2014
yami yami weight is kinda cool it reminds me of rock lee and luffy gears
R .D. T chapter 6 . 10/2/2014
i like the three kids they are funny especially in the end,
R .D. T chapter 5 . 10/2/2014
yummy man... hahahaha, oh will you insert the move adventure? oh and please consider float float fruit if you will please,
R .D. T chapter 4 . 10/1/2014
i hope he get a bigger bounty this time especially with logia power and all
R .D. T chapter 3 . 10/1/2014
you know as far as i know there is only 2 devil fruit that can cause/control tsunami, the tremor tremor fruit of whitebeard and float float fruit of shiki... hint hint... wink...wink...
R .D. T chapter 2 . 10/1/2014
i dont think it can cancel haki, it would be to OP otherwise, thought it can steal one devilu fruit power...
R .D. T chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
fufufufufu... poor blackbeard...
Rogue Deity Master chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
Am I to guess this is on Hiatus or are you discontinuing this series?
alemery chapter 9 . 7/7/2014
I love this. Your comments are funny and the story has been altered just like it should. Its great.
The 10th Wand chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Personally the reason I'd complain about Luffy's attacks is that black hole is easier and faster to say than yami yami absorption. If you wanna know why Luffy says gum gum pistol and etc. Think about what that would sound like in English. Rubber Pistol! Yeah, it just doesn't sound half as cool as black hole.

I do like the name Black Emperor though.
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