|Reviews for niley story ch1|
| JennaTheMusicalPythonite chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
I'VE SAID IT ONCE, AND I'LL SAY IT AGAIN...THIS DOES NOT BELONG IN THE CHORUS LINE SECTION! DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT IT IS?
| IAmGlitterati chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Um...why the hell is this story under "A Chorus Line"? Have you ever even HEARD of A Chorus Line?
| Behind The Screen It Falls chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Um... This is NOT from A Chorus Line, to say the least, this belongs in Hannah Montana, Camp Rock, or something, if I am correct. Because it seems like it is from Disney. This doen't belong under A Chorus Line. So please move this to where it belongs.
OwO It also needs a few more descriptions, don't worry, I have that problem, too.
| BroadwayNerd chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
I will say this once and only once; This story shouldn't be here. Do you even know what "A Chorus Line" is? Put this somewhere else, like Misc. Musicals or something more fitting. But NOT HERE.
| NunyaBiznass chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
It's a good start but you really should fix the quotes and stuff it makes it really hard to understand but otherwise then that its good you just need to finish it :D
| hsjbmd8 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
this is a good start you should def continue :)