Reviews for Tears of a Snake
pseudo-persona chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
SaiyanWarrior200, what are you doing?
Stop it. I'm not supposed to have feels for Orochimaru. I'm supposed to hate him, right?
Seriously though, this was a very welcome and refreshing change to orochimaru's character and I can't help but applaud your writing abilities, to be able to make this so beautiful, for lack of a better word.
Keep up the good work and may your other stories be just as feelsy.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
I like this, not enough people go into Orochimaru's character, they just make him a flat evil person. Very good.
Starlit Skyline chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Very nice, I like Sarutobi's sympathy with his student! :)
Grammar Mistake:
1. word confusion: '...move ON!' instead of 'move OOF!' in Jiraiya's second line.
2. word confusion: 'whether' instead of 'wither'
ThePhilosopherOfOld chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
This pulls at the heart strings. I applaud you in writing this as every other fic i see is with orochimaru acting like hes a demon. Its nice to see this
Logan chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
That was quite a beautiful story simply great and the best part is that it fits perfectly in the real story Magnificient job.
badkidoh chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
I like it .