|Reviews for Beat as One|
| Guest chapter 42 . 2/9/2013
thank you for this
| Guest chapter 42 . 10/9/2011
I really, really, really enjoyed reading this trilogy! I loved the romance and the plot line. You are very creative! I liked that it was a love story... and there was not all the big vampire/werewolf battles. I liked that you went out of the norm and they did not have a house full of children...it focused on the twilight characters. Loved it!
| Redbookbluebook chapter 32 . 9/9/2011
Oh my gosh! William likes Jake! I was totally going to guess that in an earlier chapter but I thought it was a bit out there considering but it makes so much sense! His attitude towards Seth, his mood swings with Jake, and his wanting to be with Nessie so she won't be with Jake and as a plus Jake will be jealous. Wow. You are s brilliant writer by the way. I have been completely addicted to this trilogy and Nessie makes me so angry that I applaud you; your writing makes me feel so you are obviously affecting people with it so good on you. The song someone like you by Adele reminded me of the majority of Fearless by the way. Anyway, can't wait to read more of your writing.
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/8/2011
William reminds of jacob in the reegular twilight series
| lzytigger chapter 26 . 2/18/2011
william imprinted on nessie
| lzytigger chapter 23 . 2/18/2011
is she turning back to a hybrid , will her heart start beating again and get pregnant
| lzytigger chapter 14 . 2/18/2011
yes very much time to kill the little one william
| myranda chapter 15 . 11/13/2010
that chapter was good(:
| SummerS2lOVE chapter 42 . 9/11/2010
hi, great chapters
I loved his story, really very good: D
happy that they ended up fine:)
| Esme Rox My Sox chapter 42 . 8/9/2010
these stories have been amazing.
i love them all soo much.
These have to be my all time favorite stories on fanfiction, they are so very amazing.
You are an amazing writer, and i hope to read more stories from you in the future. 3
| nessie14renesmee chapter 42 . 7/13/2010
u are a great writer i love ur stories about nessie jacob and jaspers love triangle those were my favorite storys great job and keep writing
| DreamOut chapter 37 . 5/15/2010
lol, it took me a while to click to go to the next chapter to find out if Jake made it...
| mumax1 chapter 42 . 4/20/2010
No this cant be the end! Are you going to start a new jake and nessie story or something else?
| jbaybay94 chapter 42 . 4/20/2010
That was BEAUTIFUL! :) To be honest, I almost cried while reading this chapter...especially when it was over. You are such an amazing writer and I want to THANK YOU for sharing your wonderful stories for all of us to read! I enjoyed logging on to FF and seeing you updated...I don't know what I'm going to do now! Haha :) Anyways, I loved this story (and all your other ones), especially since Jacob and Nessie did end up together! :) For a while you had me believing she was going to leave him for Jasper! So I guess I also want to thank you for NOT doing that! Haha :) Well, I think I have said all that I wanted to say...again, FANTASTIC JOB! :)
| honeygirl25 chapter 42 . 4/20/2010
hey girlir i'm so sad this is over what am i going to do now without a reason to bug you on a daily bases oh well guess that's what pm's are for haha i'm so glad i read this story and met you (well not literaly met but you know what i mean) you are a good person and writer i think that if we did know each other in the real world we'd be good friends reading all these fics has been an amazing ride we've agreed and had strong disagrements but it was all funtimes in the end and i really wish this wasnt the end you should so do a fic about william you gave a character to love anyways about the last chapter i absolutly hate it but just cuz its the end haha but no i think it was a good way to wrap the story up at this point cuz it could go on forever well if i had my way that is i love that they worked it out the best way they knew how the only thing that's ever bothered me was that jake reminds me of one of those woman who's husband is having an affair with his secretary and she know about it but stays with him cuz she doesnt believe she deserves or will find anyone better and jake's too strong for that but hey love is blind,deaf,and dumb making us the same way this fic is real life in fanfic form brought back alot of memories and made me laugh,cry,cringe,angry,happy,blush,and want to reach throug the screen and slap someone to me thats the test of a great story when it frustrates you making you want to throw something but you cant stop reading so again great fic sad its over i'll catch you on the pm's cuz i know you didnt think you were going to get rid of me that easy did ya lol bye girlie