He died that easy, I thought they would at least have to take out the snake as well but yeah he dead so no more crap from him

;-; ahh damn it Minerva, you survived the fire but just gone and got killed by cissy ;-; is everyone going to just die here

0-0 you killed Harry what the what, noooo harry no

Aarr nnooooo not Professor Mcgonagal ;-; she can't die, hermoine what is wrong with you snap out of it -_- why why do you do this?

She used legimency on hermione didn't she so hermoine has those memories there in her head

I love this story so much. You a great job
on this story.

So what, Bella re-wrote or included a lifetime of Black training and cruelty into Hermione's brain? Well that would leave anyone feeling warped and suspicious... though it does seem very OOC that she wouldn't confide in anyone about whatever messed up magic Bella used on her.
I mean she HAS to know her mind was messed with, it couldn't be more obvious.
Glad that it looks like Andy is going to tell some responsible people about Hermione and the trouble she is in.

BTW, what is it with Bella and Cissy being able to get into anywhere with no problems? Hogwarts was famously the most secure place like, anywhere really and Bella just walzed in to watch Hermione sleep. I know it might be convinient to the plot to allow that but it takes away from the story when you break established in-universe rules with no explanation.

Anyway... lovely chapter. I guss Bella is gonna drive Mione nutz and turn her into her evil sex toy/minion. Would be lovely

Well that was pretty good. As long as I pretend Hermione was snatched in some clever way this chapter was thoroughly enjoyable.
I wonder what the consequences of Bella's little 'crash course on being a Black' will be. Some of the language used hinted that Bella drove Hermione at least a little crazy with what she did. Interesting.
:) Good detail oriented writing. Love it.

I know this was finished years ago but... unexplainable character stupidity on a massive scale. Anti apparition wards? 3 v 1? Why would Hermione not fight back against someone she thinks of as pretty much a Death Eater trying to take her away?

Just... ugh. Story was going so great and then things that make absolutely no sense happen. A clever ploy by the two evil black sisters to get Hermione away from the house and ambush her would have been so much better for example

UGH! I'm gonna have to try to forget this chapter existed to enjoy the rest of the story. Which I am looking forward to. As long as, you know, Legolas doesnt forget his bow and lets the Nazgul capture him for no apparent reason. Kinda spoils the soup.

I giggle. I laugh. This first chapter was pretty good but knowing that this is gonna end up being Bellamonie just makes it a thousand times better. Incestuous. Rawr.

:D

I seldom bother to leave reviews when I've read a story. Only if it has truly moved me. I find myself with so much I want to say but the words aren't coming to me. This is one story I sat down and read in one go straight, even as I struggled to stay awake and with a full bladder during the last few chapters. It is perfect. There is no other word for it than perfect.

Tks very much. I reallu really love the way u wrote

interesting fanfic

Excellent story- one of the best I've ever read.

I absolutely adored the ending. It encompassed it all so perfectly and I couldnt of hoped for anything better. I was worried with where it was heading, but I guess I should have just trusted your writing as it hasn't failed yet :)