Reviews for A Tale of Two Sisters
the naru foxxx chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
so is there a follow up or some thing coz dis dosent fill like a one shout it fills more like the first ch of of a story that you didn't want to finish after you had written the first ch
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
please!
don't forgot write some more adds to my faorite storu, ok!
Shakari chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
This is really interesting! If you look at this then Vitani's line "Where's you're pretty daughter Nala?" it would make it seem like Vitani knew that she was Nala's daughter. I wish you'd add more to this, it's a great idea.
a shade of grey91 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Wow, this is good, just what would happen if the orirginal story continued with this little detail...i dont think Vitani would ever forgive simba! i hope you continue this in some way or fashion!
AshWolf Forever chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
This is a very interesting idea. And very well written, too. Good job.
EhMa chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
And here I thought I'd never read a Lion King story, much less favorite one! But I gotta admit, this is a very interesting theory you have here. I love it! Pity its only a one-shot, I would've loved to have seen how Vitani being the rightful heir and Kiara being Kovu's sister would change things. This was very nicely done.
TheLionESS-232 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Ha, this was good, but, and this isn't meant to be mean, I'm glad it isn't true ;). I mean... if it was... *Gulps* Kovu and Kiara would be... get my point? ;)
Shembre chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Hey, KH!

I like how this was written- you have a very nice style! The idea was also neat. It was interesting to see Simba so disconnected from the life of the young cub who is Nala's "real" daughter. :D
Neversaid-I-Madesense chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Holy feck.

I loved this! I had to review! The theory is so epic, so original, you're a genius! Seriously. I've thought of Vitani and Kiara being half-sisters, at least, but never this...

Great job, well written!