Reviews for Motoko's Secret
Patcheresu chapter 6 . 9/26/2010
Amazing story there, MAH BOI
Marzan chapter 6 . 3/28/2010
Loved the ending. Look forward to reading more of your stories.
SecondSeraphim chapter 5 . 3/27/2010
This is really good for your first fanfiction.
SecondSeraphim chapter 6 . 3/27/2010
"No one's going to take my sempai away from me!"

Keitaro and Naru stared. Kitsune backed away.

"Um, Shinobu, put the sword down honey -"

Best. Bit. EVER..
Gojirob chapter 6 . 3/27/2010
You caught what many authors seemed to fail to : That even in the violence of Love Hina, there is gentleness and support. No one was dissed, and even Kei's treatment didn't seem out of line (any more out of line than usual).
Jamapy chapter 6 . 3/27/2010
I say this fanfic has great simple idea. Just one question: what's Tsuruko think when She heard/read about Motoko in newspaper?
0208 chapter 6 . 3/27/2010
come on please make it kei/mot ending PLEASE i have really enjoyed this story but leaving it to hang like that its sad so again PLEASE make it kei/mot ending
Nysk chapter 6 . 3/27/2010
heh shame you ended it, but still a fun read while it lasted!

thanks for writing!
bosk chapter 5 . 3/20/2010
Poor Keitaro, lol. I hope you will give him a break (and I don't mean bone(s) XD) in the following chapters. Otherwise a very entertaining story.
Fox Boss chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
I just had an intersting idea. What if in each match Motoko has she wears a different outfit like on CardCaptor Sakura.
Marzan chapter 4 . 3/15/2010
While reading this I couldn't help but wishing there was some illustrations attached to this story! Seriously now, I like the dialogue, specially Kitsune's lines are hilarious. Keep it up.
Nysk chapter 4 . 3/15/2010
Snicker... interesting chapter... nice fashion show... more Kei/Motoko time please :)
0208 chapter 4 . 3/15/2010
well just for once make Keitaro hit Naru its pissing me off all the time seeing him hit by her i think she deserves to travel to brazil while traveling all over ourope and atlantic

Dont remember if i have reviewd prev but story is great i just hope Keitaro and Motoko atleast end up together.
Chownz chapter 4 . 3/14/2010
I hope Naru gets her head knocked off! She's starting to piss me off for some reason? I hate that pervert (Naru)!

Sorry just me ranting O_O
Ninja on the Roof chapter 4 . 3/14/2010
Whoa... You weren't kiddin' about the fanservice.

But great work anyway.

Now I think need to lie down...
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