Reviews for Motoko's Secret
Mr. Lee chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Hello Ammaranth, this is Mr. Lee. If I'm not mistaken, this is your first fic. If it is, congrats and good luck! With that said, let's get to your LH story. Overall, the chap wasn't bad. And your detail of the kendo match was good. However, as detailed as that was, there was one part that wasn't...the reason for Motoko's DQ. Seki was not seriously hurt, and from what I read, Motoko did not make an illegal move. You need to explain this and give a valid reason or it will cost you. Good luck! Later :)!
Ninja on the Roof chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Heh heh, funny.

Nice job.
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