|Reviews for Animal Farm Deleted Scenes|
| Chloe chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
Hello snowball how are you? can I help you out in the farm? I am a human I must admit but I can help find aniamls from thouse dreadful factory farms the
humans there diniey the aniamls any fresb air or sun.
| jaconda chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
This is not a review for this. Sorry. I wanted to say something about that Doctor Who/Megamind crossover, War Stories. The TARDIS is dimensionally transcendental. What's this ism?
Unless the Doctor has adjusted his key, only he can use it. How could Megamind understand the controls anyway?
The Doctor's line was, I was there at the fall of Arcadia. Not I destroyed it, I was there. And things like cities and empires fall. Planets don't.
| Obscene Cupcake chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
why was this in crossover?
btw I like it. very witty o.~ and well written
| IronSpockMaster chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
I love some of the speeches in this.
I think your writing got a little rambly nearer the end, but you're only fourteen (or at lesast you were when you wrote this) so well done!
| Talibra chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I find this quite interesting, though I'm not sure what it has to do with Harry Potter!
And this: "The second option was that Amelia now feared Thomas." I am not sure why but I find that a sharp, attention-grabbing line, especially in the way you isolated it for emphasis.
If you do ever continue this, I will be sure to read it.