|Reviews for What have I done?|
| Indille chapter 1 . 10/16/2002
Oh! Beautiful. Well, not beautiful, of course, but beautifully effective. Who is the speaker? Being a Maglor obsessive, that's who I would guess, but it might have been anyone. Well, not Feanor...
| Furius chapter 1 . 7/26/2002
Very interesting, but the "before it truly hit home" sounds very alien in the passage. The story holds for all that participated in the Aqualonde though, nice work
| Kielle chapter 1 . 6/12/2002
Brrr. Short but to the point - you managed to get across a ton of horror in only three paragraphs. Excellent choice of subject, and well done!
| Ithilwen of Himring chapter 1 . 4/23/2002
Well done! Please write more - we need more good pieces like these. Some would call it short, but it's actually just as long as it needs to be, not a single word is wasted or redundant, and the imagry is beautiful. I look forward to seeing more Silmarillion fics from you in the future!
| Arwen Imladviel chapter 1 . 4/11/2002
A drop of blood, so dark, so red.
| Le Chat Noir chapter 1 . 4/8/2002
Wonderful description of what an elf must have felt after the Kinslaying. Poignant and so very somehow true-sounding, if that's a word.
| Snitter in Rivendell chapter 1 . 4/3/2002
ai! please contiune! this is great great!
| Rociriel chapter 1 . 3/25/2002
Who was that? The implication seems to be that his right hand is missing, therefore Maedhros, but he lost his hand a bit later, did he not?
More Silmarillion stuff, please. It's sadly lacking in this forest of ever increasing fangirl fluff.
| Glorfindel's Girl chapter 1 . 3/23/2002
Oh, wow. This story really drives the point home. Truly excellent. I've been trying to write a story about the kinslaying for ages, but can never get my thoughts onto paper just right. The world needs more Silmarillion authors.
About 90% of the stuff I write is Silmarillion based. (Shameless self-promotion, here) I'm working on a fic about the fall of Doriath, done from Maedhros' POV and Elured/Elurin's (Dior's children) POV. It's called Blood of Innocents. Watch for it, if you're interested...
Peace, Love, and the insufferable Fluffy Bunnies,
| Rhundar chapter 1 . 3/17/2002
Ah, that was indeed excellent. The kinslaying is a terrible thing in the Sil, but this short piece really drives home how terrible it really was. The Sil depicts it, written by an unafected historion. I thought this was very good, seeing the kinslaying through the eyes of an elf who actually partook in the slaughter. Nice!
| valinorean chapter 1 . 3/2/2002
OMG! short but profound. i've always loved (or despaired, take your pick) the kinslaying scene in the silmarillion. this is a great pov, and the anonimity of it would reflect on the many pains of the noldor who fought on the shores of alqualonde. truly, you inspire me, and i thank you.
| Finrod Felagund chapter 1 . 2/15/2002
Short but good and very descriptive! Please write more SILM fics soon!:)
| Lillian C chapter 1 . 1/31/2002
Please do continue! We need lots more Silmarillion fics! :D
| Kida Greenleaf chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
Beautiful, poignant POV piece on the kinslaying which still haunts the elves. I look forward to reading mmoree of your work. The Silmarillion rocks!
| Imp chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
Very well done. It's about time someone wrote something intelligent around here. I haven't seen a Silmarillion story for what seems like ages - and one that was well written... Who's POV was it? Was it Maedhros? Well, nevermind, I enjoyed it. Tootles-IMP