This story is absolutely amazing! I love your writing style, characterization, and omg your version of Shinigami-sama behind the mask, I just have no words! And to top it off, I have to say I adore the way you've delved more into the characters persanalitys and actually made them easier to connect with than they are in the manga/anime(not that I don't adore the series, I love it, but the lack of character development makes me sad sometimes :(). I know it's been a long time since the last update, but I really hope you'll consider continuing this story someday, it's just so well done that it'd be a shame for it to be left unfinished.

This is quite glorious, and I can't wait to read more.

Death the Kid is a Boss. Or son there of, at least...

Note: Obviously you should try to at least end at chapter 8, to keep symmetry. (Though more would not be a bad thing)

Wow! Your story is great. I have only read a handful of fanfics in and DeviantArt that are as good as this. :)

I hope one day you continue this great piece of literature. :D

Please please please finish the story. It's an amazing piece of literature.

Im one devil of an author (kuroshitsuji joke)

-fanningfireflies

Godddd I love thisssss 3333

Awesome story!

I LOVE your writing! You have a wonderful way of griping the reader and making them want more! great work! The character interaction is perfect, just the way I felt it would be if we could see more behind the scenes. So I'm really happy your writing this and I look forward to readin more!

oh, I also wanted to say that I really love the way you describe Shinigami-sama (I tried to draw him without his mask, looking human with three complete stripes... but felt like I couldn't capture it well.) The way you describe him makes it seem perfect, exactly what I'd always imagined!

This is such a delightful story - I love the family dynamic, Shinigami-sama, and Kid is adorable with his symmetry fixation. I really want to see more, and I'm going to go ahead and sub & fave so I can stay tuned :D

This is one of the best Kid/Liz?patty origin stories I've read! Good job!

Whoa! I really like your story!

I'm not really good at reviewing'n stuff, but I wanted you to know that I really appreciat it!

I love this story and I honestly don't see why it doesn't have more reviews! I love LizKiddPatti fics, but it's so hard to find one that is just friendship/family related. So you can imagine that finding a good famil fic really made me squee. I'll be waiting!

you shud so make another chapter :O

"Shinigami CHOP!"

"Hnn… I knew Chichi-ue invented that technique for something."

Well, what do know it looks like he did. I love fics that have kid using the shinigami chop. This story is great so far, can't wait until the next update!

lol diplomatic immunity ftw XD

great chapter btw

you write all of the characters very well. great story :D