|Reviews for Heartbreak Hotline|
| ievandie chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
I can't help it: just totally hooked on this film and your stories about it!
Greetings from Holland.
| Alice in June chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
Ah, that's a lovely story.
| micky chapter 1 . 5/9/2003
i is checking this all da time! bin waitin for months now! ADD A NEW CHAPTER PRONTO I WILL BE SO HAPPY IF YA DO! :D:D:D:D:!
| PenguinFlavoredFilm chapter 1 . 3/28/2003
awesome! i think you should make a longer version of this, more chapters, with more conversations with basil (eddie) talking about himself, that would be great! just saying that would be a cool idea, not saying you HAVE to. :P
| Divamercury chapter 1 . 9/28/2002
Great story! Loved it.
| saicho-18 chapter 1 . 8/17/2002
seen the ending miles away but still sweet. i mean, what else do you expect from a romantic movie, right?
saicho_18 : slytherin -
| Morrigain chapter 1 . 4/16/2002
awww... cute idea, but a little short. And, although I liked it, it was really predictiable. Maybe you should haven't made Jane finding out that Eddie was Basil happen so quickly or so easily. Hint that it could be him, but make Jane wonder and think herself out of the idea. You don't really show her in depth perspective enough, just what someone would expect her to feel. Just try for more description. Otherwise, the story was adorable!
| nat chapter 1 . 2/3/2002
"Basil" was an interesting idea ;). Love this story! :)
| KhakiGrrl chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
Awww. Cute in the extreme. I loved Basil and how it all ended up for Jane and Eddie. So sweet.