Reviews for Under the Stars
Frozen Fox 95 chapter 20 . 12/28/2016
Why have you not continued this. It's awesome
Franchute chapter 20 . 11/23/2016
man... your story is amazing, I love the way you write, but I've gotta say that the end of the story as I see it, it was short and anticlimatic. I mean. seriously?. all that inner fight and finding a reason to keep fighting just to end with only one phrase?. I know that writing a story isn't easy, but for all that you made him go through. the readers expect you would put a little more impact over his possible dead or a little more emotion of his or ahsoka's part. like when jiraiya died in the anime. I don't know man so many possibilitie.
I am going to be honest. I was hopping a heratbreaking end that would made me cry.
but regardless. it was very good story. I loved every chapter of it.
keep the way you're going. you're doing great.
I only have two questions. first. what about their child? you didn't mention if it was born or not, if was boy or girl. and second are you going to make a sequel?.
Greetings from Colombia.
blazenite104 chapter 6 . 8/21/2016
andddd the romance is rushed...
blazenite104 chapter 5 . 8/21/2016
I'm gonna keep reading but, seriously results of shinobi training or not he's still a thirteen year old here unless I've missed something. I suppose the training time could be feasible with the use of shadow clones and all, but in reality you've apparently made him better with a saber than most other padawans in three months.
R chapter 10 . 7/18/2016
I'm not a fan of the maul-clone idea. Not cool.
Naruto pulling an Obi-Wan is fucking stupid.

Still, this story is a hell of a lot better than most.
AnonymousGX chapter 19 . 3/23/2016
Ahsoka is now in Rebels. And while it may seem like Naruto is dead, we know how he uses the Force to make himself immune to Lightsabers (you focused on that during the attempted executions). Even if Palpatine got him, we know his healing factor, and the fact he has done Substitution Jutsu.
Want to revive this within Star Wars Rebels?
Guest chapter 20 . 2/19/2016
Well this was a good story looking forward to your next.
MizuSage chapter 20 . 1/22/2016
Your story is amazing!

I just love what you've written.

However, the ending brought up a few possibilities for a sequel...

"With that, the two returned to their ship, leaving
as the gentle falling of the Corellian snow buried
the **empty** cloak of Naruto Uzumaki."

...and so he became one with the Force? This sounds similar to when Darth Vader searches for Obi Wan's missing body in an empty cloak after striking him in half.

That or Naruto did a substitute jutsu like Kakashi in the land of waves arc, faking death, escaping and passing out. (Like others have probably pointed out he could have used a shadow clone!) Kurama would then be trying to heal the injury 'cause it does not seem as bad a location as the chidori through the chest.

Hoping to know if I got either way right, all I know is I want more!

Guest chapter 20 . 1/6/2016
Screw you and your crap story, beginning was good but damn if you didn't fuck it up,, wasting my time reading this shit
Don chapter 20 . 12/14/2015
The way you ended this, that Naruto sounds like a shadow clone.
IansInsane chapter 20 . 12/7/2015
IansInsane chapter 11 . 12/7/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
I have to say this story is amazingly good from start to finish I can only hope you make another chapter but how it ends may also be one of the best parts amazing with action,describing,plot twist,and romance I couldn't stop once I started so thank you for creating a amazing story
KingOfThunder989 chapter 20 . 10/24/2015
Well fuck, Naruto is dead. Great chapter nonetheless.
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 10/23/2015
Update immediately, please!
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