|Reviews for FiveRegion Rush|
| KimLoveMe chapter 2 . 2/25/2010
Sound good so far!
update please 3
| Hotrod198 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
This is a good story however i suggest to slow the pace down. The story is moving way too fast for any one to keep up. Anyways keep updating! Hotrod out
| x xac chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
You know, for a completely original plotline, your characters sure aren't original.
And in that list of regions, you forgot Fiore and Almia, making it seven (eight if you also count Oblivia).
I can't make any further comments until you further the story. Keep it up, or better yet, improve it. It'll improve you as well. _