Reviews for Someone to Protect Him
attagrl chapter 8 . 3/20/2010
great chapter

Like the history injection as well as the prospect of everyone bring at the school come fall.

...oh lets not forget the seduction...
janet1982 chapter 8 . 3/20/2010
hm, interesting:)

please update soon:)
Lientjuhh chapter 8 . 3/20/2010
I love it.. Well done.. :)
sianalove chapter 8 . 3/20/2010
awesome,yet again :)i'm excited for this whole seduction plan, don't dangle it for too long ;)
DesertRoseFallen chapter 8 . 3/20/2010
O exciting stuff! I love the way Lucius is about to control Hogwarts. I hope he visits a lot. You know, I could see him as a great, sexy headteacher...yum. Adored little Harry and his 'seduction' idea. Please update soon!
Dolosus chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
I must say that I can't get enough of Charlie/Harry, and so I really want this story to continue. That being said, it reads a bit fast. The first chapter, while interesting, goes too quickly and it feels like you're reading a summary instead of a story. I think you should break it up a bit with either more dialogue or more details. The only other thing that irks me a bit is when Dumbledore seems evil for no reason. It always feels like a cliche to me when authors don't fully explain why he wants Harry to stay with his abusive relatives. You mention briefly what Dumbledore says his reasons are, and maybe you have future plans for this.

Don't feel like this is a bad review, for I am truly looking forward to the direction this story is taking. Keep up the good work, I love your ideas. :)
attagrl chapter 7 . 3/17/2010
Oh no those damn 1/2 heard conversations...

Oh no those damn cliffhanger loving authors...
DarkBombayAngel chapter 7 . 3/17/2010
Awesome chapter. -
attagrl chapter 5 . 3/17/2010
Omg! ! The last sentence killed me! She takes payment for being his friend, bosses him around, ignores calls for help and NOW all of a sudden she's us the revelation that he never lies? I'm all for redemption but I hope that's nit the case with hermoine down the line!
attagrl chapter 3 . 3/17/2010
Love the pet name...even aside from the explanation.

So what's his hidden agenda...money? Power? Control? All of the above lol
attagrl chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
To do list...rescue Harry, murder dursleys, castrate dumbledore
peruser chapter 7 . 3/17/2010
You never hear anything good when you only hear part of a conversation. Poor confused Harry! At least Charlie is living up to his promise to protect Harry. I see that Fudge is still an idiot! Just because Harry got rid of Voldemort indeed! He acts like it was no big deal that Harry defeated Voldemort. Fudge the lying coward who was in denial couldn't have done it. He wouldn't even acknowledge that the maniac was back! I hope Bill and Charlie plug any loopholes before Dumbledore can take advantage of them.
Buckwheat Zydeco chapter 7 . 3/17/2010
Boy, you sure know how to keep people in suspense. Misunderstandings abound!
crazylove4MCR chapter 7 . 3/17/2010
aww... no! poor poor harry! you're so evil to make him always so upset.. but I love it! update soon!
DesertRoseFallen chapter 7 . 3/17/2010
Oh Harry, you always take things the wrong way or don't stay to hear the rest of it. Haha. Aww I loved this chapter, hate Molly, Dumbles and Fudge ew. Please update soon!
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