|Reviews for Overtime|
| July Storms chapter 1 . 5/13
This sure got a laugh out of me. Edward, your innocence saved everyone a bit of pain this time around. Bravo, boy. ;)
| waddiwasiwitch chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
Poor innocent, clueless Ed!
| HarborRat chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Couldn't wipe the smile off my face as I read this. Nice job.
| smylealong2k chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
A few years later Ed is going to think back to this incident and go 'Ah!'
Loved it. Brilliant!
| Ash chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
| jessi chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Excellent story! Poor naïve Ed...
| edwardfiend chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
This was hilarious! Boy that administrative work sure can cause one to work up a sweat eh? lol, Edward is so naive. bahbah. :)
| PhoenixNoTreble chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Ha, this was great! I loved it! I can actually see this happening... I don't have much advice because it's awesome as is _
I'm probably going to spend all weekend reading your stories :D
| uhuhuhuhuhuhu chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
This is hysterical XD
And it's safe to say I'll never see sodium in quite the same light again XD
| Starship Artisan chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Ed is so naive... I love it! xD
| Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Oh, poor, innocent minded Ed. He had absolutely NO idea... But when he looks back on this encounter in the future... surely he'd realize...
This was quite entertaining.
| Perennial Rhinitis chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Hihihi, Ed's so cute! He's such a kid sometimes. :)
| Smoky Opium chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
"classified administration" huh?. I guess you would want it to be classified in this case _-.
Loved Hawkeye's response to Edward's question about Mustang's leg; "overtaxing" and "swollen" LOL. I wonder what Mustang would have to say about that first one though...
| Radon65 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Haahahahahaha! That was HILARIOUS! The first part with Ed apparently comparing Amestris' border soldiers to a herd of rheumatic sheep was funny, but it got really good when he showed up at the office. Mustang and Hawkeye were hysterical - I love how Mustang was sweating and looked kind of giddy, and the "Sodium!" shouted by Hawkeye was awesome... Loved Ed's thoughts about alcohol and possible gas leaks, and I really liked the description of Hawkeye's "wet, skittish eyes." I also just realized exactly WHY Mustang was limping when he went out of the office. Man, this was really funny!
| parris411 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Great one shot.
Ah the slowness of ed lol.
I laughed my ass of through this.
I could just picture ed's little rant.