Reviews for Overtime
0anhonestpuck0 chapter 1 . 7/27
Freaking hilarious! Haha I can see realizing what he walked in on later on and having a delayed meltdown. Hehe
hunntea chapter 1 . 2/5
I've never been one to leave reviews but? This one shot is so good I was dying! It's great you did a great job you're a great person with a great talent! Great great great! I love comedy and you did this so well!
July Storms chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
This sure got a laugh out of me. Edward, your innocence saved everyone a bit of pain this time around. Bravo, boy. ;)
waddiwasiwitch chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
Poor innocent, clueless Ed!
HarborRat chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Couldn't wipe the smile off my face as I read this. Nice job.
smylealong2k chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
A few years later Ed is going to think back to this incident and go 'Ah!'
Loved it. Brilliant!
Ash chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Awesome
jessi chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Excellent story! Poor naïve Ed...
edwardfiend chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
This was hilarious! Boy that administrative work sure can cause one to work up a sweat eh? lol, Edward is so naive. bahbah. :)
PhoenixNoTreble chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Ha, this was great! I loved it! I can actually see this happening... I don't have much advice because it's awesome as is _

I'm probably going to spend all weekend reading your stories :D
uhuhuhuhuhuhu chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
This is hysterical XD

And it's safe to say I'll never see sodium in quite the same light again XD
Starship Artisan chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Ed is so naive... I love it! xD
Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Oh, poor, innocent minded Ed. He had absolutely NO idea... But when he looks back on this encounter in the future... surely he'd realize...

This was quite entertaining.
Perennial Rhinitis chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Hihihi, Ed's so cute! He's such a kid sometimes. :)
Smoky Opium chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
"classified administration" huh?. I guess you would want it to be classified in this case _-.

Loved Hawkeye's response to Edward's question about Mustang's leg; "overtaxing" and "swollen" LOL. I wonder what Mustang would have to say about that first one though...
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