Reviews for Overtime
July Storms chapter 1 . 5/13
This sure got a laugh out of me. Edward, your innocence saved everyone a bit of pain this time around. Bravo, boy. ;)
waddiwasiwitch chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
Poor innocent, clueless Ed!
HarborRat chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Couldn't wipe the smile off my face as I read this. Nice job.
smylealong2k chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
A few years later Ed is going to think back to this incident and go 'Ah!'
Loved it. Brilliant!
Ash chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
jessi chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Excellent story! Poor naïve Ed...
edwardfiend chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
This was hilarious! Boy that administrative work sure can cause one to work up a sweat eh? lol, Edward is so naive. bahbah. :)
PhoenixNoTreble chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Ha, this was great! I loved it! I can actually see this happening... I don't have much advice because it's awesome as is _

I'm probably going to spend all weekend reading your stories :D
uhuhuhuhuhuhu chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
This is hysterical XD

And it's safe to say I'll never see sodium in quite the same light again XD
Starship Artisan chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Ed is so naive... I love it! xD
Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Oh, poor, innocent minded Ed. He had absolutely NO idea... But when he looks back on this encounter in the future... surely he'd realize...

This was quite entertaining.
Perennial Rhinitis chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Hihihi, Ed's so cute! He's such a kid sometimes. :)
Smoky Opium chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
"classified administration" huh?. I guess you would want it to be classified in this case _-.

Loved Hawkeye's response to Edward's question about Mustang's leg; "overtaxing" and "swollen" LOL. I wonder what Mustang would have to say about that first one though...
Radon65 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Haahahahahaha! That was HILARIOUS! The first part with Ed apparently comparing Amestris' border soldiers to a herd of rheumatic sheep was funny, but it got really good when he showed up at the office. Mustang and Hawkeye were hysterical - I love how Mustang was sweating and looked kind of giddy, and the "Sodium!" shouted by Hawkeye was awesome... Loved Ed's thoughts about alcohol and possible gas leaks, and I really liked the description of Hawkeye's "wet, skittish eyes." I also just realized exactly WHY Mustang was limping when he went out of the office. Man, this was really funny!
parris411 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Great one shot.

Ah the slowness of ed lol.

I laughed my ass of through this.

I could just picture ed's little rant.
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