|Reviews for Desire|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/26
Not enough Ilia/Link; this was a very welcome fic, though it felt a tad short. Still, it's far better than quite a few of the numerous half literate attempts at throwing the overused princesses - Midna or Zelda - together with the Hero. Those who can't appreciate Ilia are just stuck in a box of inanity.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
This story was very well written and very believe able. Great job!
| CaptainAssassin chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
I like this story it is more realistic than usual.
| RyoshiMorino chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Very nice, keep it up.
| draco122 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
as you have asked is hall be honest. I loved it. It was a little chessy but i still loved it
| grayhippo chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
I think it was good. I've always loved the couple however it's kind of ooc for him because in my opinion he always has only truly cared romantically for Zelda.
| truthlieslovestars chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
hahahahah...i'm a sicko...
| Edgar Night chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
...It's come to my attention that I've read this story at least three times and I never actually got around to reviewing it. Shame on me. XD
I love it. I don't think I found a single typo or error of any sort, and it's just wonderful. There's really not much else to say. -grins sheepishly-
Honestly, I'm usually not a fan of talking!Link, but this...fits. And this is, I think, the first time I've read M!fic that could actually be classified as "OMGADORABLESQUEEAWWW". FEEL AWESOME.
| Fyanna3 chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Yay yay yay! Love the fanfiction, and I agree! M rated fiction is great, but either really slutty or just unusual..._ I love this pairing, and you've really wrote this well! That's another thing with M rated...sloppy writing, but you've done a great job. Thanks for the read!
| Saki08 chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
oh, I like it so much! :3 it was really cute! :D 3
| xBathsheba chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
It's pretty funny what you said about the world's most experienced virgins. Way to go on making them sound not quite so much like that, although I still think it's almost impossible to have virgins in a story and avoid complete cliche. I have a theory that Link was a total dog the whole time he was off adventuring, but I liked this story. Sexy without getting too gross. (So says the dyke reviewing a hetero story... :/ )
| ArtificialRangerLiuria chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I've decided to start reading M-rated fanfictions because i need something to go by when I start writing them(since hentai isn't exactly about "love" most of the time).I'm not A fan of the pairing(in fact,I DESPISE Ilia),but you wrote this so well it was almost enjoyable for job.