|Reviews for Time, Space and Lovers|
| Naoki Nyan chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
T-Try putting some periods next time, aha. I kinda like this because it's my OTP and screw Palkia for playing with time! XD
Anyway, great. I'd like it better if you elaborated more hmhmhm
| misakiluvusagi chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
Aww I loved it! Please make more of the same couple! And ALOT more sex.
| sidney chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Omg, how sweet! But I like lemon yuri/yaoi where they dont exactly beat around the bush and have sex a little early. And discriptions were great, its also good where you can explain every thing by detail so you can imagine it good. I give it a 8!
| Unwritetobeunwritten chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Awesome! Maybe you should separate the paragraphs. Still, overall great fanfic!
| Lexi chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Great story, but your sentences all run on. You need to add some more periods in there. I always love seeing(reading) Barry as the bottom.