Reviews for Beyond and above
OnTheUpNUpJack chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
You're story has much potential. But, the grammar could use a bit of reviewing. Ever considered getting a beta? They'll edit your story for you so that the grammar makes sense. I think that that would be best for you. I'm willing to Beta it if you would like. Just PM me.
elmjuniper chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
heya,

just read your story - the first chapter.

i think your story is interesting, and as you said yourself your grammar is slightly off because english is not your first language. but storywise it's good. :)