|Reviews for Nomad|
| Viveen chapter 18 . 1/28
Well written and I liked that you tied up everything at the end. Pace was a little slow to start with but it quickly ramped up to the point I lost a nights sleep because I couldn't put it down. Thank you and well done!
| Kushka chapter 18 . 10/17/2016
| 101storyaddict chapter 18 . 6/21/2016
loved it :-)
| featherdusterpixie chapter 8 . 5/13/2016
its rather judgmental about red eyes, their only doing whats natural, like a wolf or a shark, its doesnt make all red eyes monsters.
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 18 . 12/18/2015
| hikingurl chapter 18 . 11/2/2015
This story was mentioned on a Facebook post so I clicked over and have been really glad I need. Great story, great writing. Thank you.
| CoppertopJ chapter 18 . 8/25/2015
Sorry I did not review each chapter, guess I was just too damn thirsty for the next one. Read the entire story today, and have several things to say. It was extremely well written, original plot, great surprises, and now one of my absolute favorites. Absolutely loved it. Well done.
| renewagain chapter 17 . 1/9/2015
I was reading daybreak by kay0913 and she recommended this. I'm so glad!
| renewagain chapter 18 . 1/9/2015
What a great story! I love this idea and how you wove in some aspects of canon. This hooked me in and kept me going until sleep or work made me stop. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 18 . 1/4/2015
I think it would've been better to give Vanessa over to charlie after her father was killed by the bear. She should've been adopted by him. [If you made her 15 or so] Then Jake could've imprinted from there, and it would've keep Wolf pack and Cullens life seperate. Because everyone keeps trying to THROW them together like wolf and vamp could live together.
The smell ppl the smell! no to mention the inbred instinct to kill one another.
Okay okay...They don't have to be bitter enemies, i get that. But we don't always have to make them, buddy buddy ,and 'attached' for all time.
Get along while they are together in the same area, then GO THEIR SEPARATE WAYS. its that so hard? smh.
Seriously why do fanfic writers have such a hard damn time letting go. PPl have different lives, you don't have to stick all your characters up each others ass. Especially if they smell like the thing coming out of one. Good grief.
But you story, so I say no more.
Thank you for your contribution. Feel Free to check out NEW ECLIPSE and HORIZON and critic the hell of me. LOL.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 15 . 1/4/2015
Now all three cullen girls were raped to death. gr8.
Jeez what's with fanfic writers and rape?
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 13 . 1/3/2015
Seriously what with the indifference with the cullen family in fanfics. The wolfs shit a brick every time a vampire so much as glares at their land, but they just storm over and kick thier feet up and no one has shit to say?
ROLL MY EFFING EYES
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 6 . 1/3/2015
Standing there like a punk does not a man make EDWARD.
Gawd, the didn't stand up for himself or Bella. He just stood there like a 'mitch' and just took it.
Tell that trick to find a corner and a john and be about her business. -hastag: BIGPIMPIN
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Love the tempo of your characters. and pace of the story itself. gr8 job.
| Sailaranel chapter 18 . 10/6/2014
I love that Charlie got closure.
I've read too many fics where it gets glossed over, and he never gets a resolution, or it stays to canon, but I've always wondered why bella doesn't go this route yours did after the newborn year was over if he couldn't be told. Still devastating for him, but a cop would never give up on his daughter, so I loved yours. Her response was amazing too.
A lovely end to a great story