|Reviews for A Roll of the Dice|
| BamaBabe chapter 2 . 5/10/2011
This story really captures yearning. Even after a year of being together, the doubt is still in there.
I love, love, love Jasper and you did a fine job of showing that he is gently leading Edward, even though neither has any experience.
| BamaBabe chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
I love the progression of this story and how sweet and nervous both boys are.
When I read this, I thought of this picture:
Thanks for sharing!
| Amber1983 chapter 2 . 4/25/2011
Brilliant! Never thought slash could be so hot! And also so incredibly sweet. Got confused and thought it was a one shot at first so was ecstatic to see the second chap as I defininely wanted more of these two. Such cute, geeky love! And I now feel enriched by knowing a bit more about what on earth D&D games are! X
| rhythm junkie chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Absolutely perfectly captures that crazy teenage want - totally sublime.
| amused-cat23 chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
Once again, *squeal*! Super freaking adorable!
| amused-cat23 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Ahhhhhhh! *squeal* This is so freakishly adorable it should be illegal! I absolutely love geeky boys, particularly geeky Edwards and Jaspers. Oh man oh man! I need to find more nerd stories like this!
| MandiJo17 chapter 2 . 3/28/2011
Ah! Just found this story again through peoples favorites and I'm so glad I did! This is one of my friend's and my favorites! We read it back at the beginning of September and loved it!
| The-Fun-In-Funeral chapter 2 . 3/28/2011
Well fuck me up and call me a whore... THAT. WAS. AWESOME!
Normally I don't like chapters that are all sex but you were so sweet and pure about it, you know? The fact that they were virgins also made it so adorable. I don't know much about D&D but I really loved all the nerd-slang and the symbolism. What did Jas say? "There are no other players." Yeah, I was grinning all post-coital like when i read that.
So basically... Good. Flippen. Job.
(P.S. That's the longest review I've ever written so you should be pretty proud :] )
| flutterfli chapter 2 . 3/25/2011
OME! I'm so picturing Daniel Gale. LOL Yes, very dorky agreed, but absolutely love it. You took me back to college with the D I didn't play but my then boyfriend did. The DM even had the dungeon mapped out on graph paper. (Is that normal?) Thanks for the memories and the great story.
| arfalcon chapter 2 . 3/19/2011
Loved your original story a year ago, and I love this continuation even more. There's just something about the way you write the pull between these two that makes it seem like this is a relationship that was always meant to be. Hehe, now that I think about it, I think "A Roll of the Dice" was the first slash I'd ever read. I've read a fair amount since, but yours is still the best.
I'm so happy that you're having so much success with your writing. It's well deserved.
| Aylah50 chapter 2 . 3/17/2011
This was hysterical! I dated a guy in college who was a total D&D addict - this totally took me back! Great job! :)
| reve2weaver chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
Oh I liked these boys... geeky and yet firmly attached to their testosterone... sexy and I appreciate that you keep the difficulty of firt time schematics real as it makes their moment that much more intimate and heartfelt... Hmmmm... I think it isn't birds and birds but bees'n bees because they have stingers...
| Mol3247 chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
You are a wonderful writer! Great story...
| FOXY-FEET chapter 2 . 3/8/2011
yay! just awesome. these two make the warm and fuzzies for me. first slash I ever read and I *heart* them.
| bornonhalloween chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
What an amazing chapter. This is probably the most beautiful telling of this particular moment that I've read, and I'm embarrassed to say I've read quite a few! The love and devotion that these two show each other in every single moment of their time together is brilliant. Whether they're playing in their dungeon or in each other's bodies, they never fail to do and say the exact right thing. Truly a most beautiful story and an absolute pleasure to read.
You really know how to capture the intensity of those special moments between two people who care deeply for each other. So many great lines of dialog I couldn't even name them all. I loved both POV of this little story and would love to hear what these boys are doing in ten years. Do you dare?
THANKS SO MUCH for adding a chapter! I loved it!