Reviews for Liberation
MyladyNancy chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
excellent job.
Anne Celeste chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
This wud make a good multi-chapter fic,,,if the story continued,where bella wud heal and eventualy live HEA with edward
rooslovesjackson chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
love it
Pt chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
You should definatly continue this...I really like it
FrostedMiniWheatz chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
really really good kinda thought there would b more
cheertastic978 chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
hey please update soon i love it... i know tat it is a complete story but i think the majority of people who read this story want you to continue :D
krystalmethx chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
You're supposed to make the conversation on another line.

For Example:


"You've got to give me answers." Bella sighed frustratedly.

"Yes, no, to get to the other side, 1.77245385-" Edward answered until he was rudely interrupted by the impatient human across from hum.

"I don't want to know the square root of pi!" She stated as she rolled her eyes.

"You knew that?" Edward asked, astonished by her high level of intelligence.


LOL I just added the Edward asked blah blah blah Bella said blah blah blah. -
Isabellamariesummer chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
more spaces it looks like you've written more and plz write more
Glistening Teardrop chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
oh, i was really hoping that you were going to turn this into a story. i love where it is going
gwennsc chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
I am intrigued by this start. Please continue it!
KatherineB chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
wow! this is really good! please please please update this story! x
McAliceKatePotterGHShield chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
i really like this i think u shld add to it!
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Editing's fine... Is this DEFINITELY only a O/S or will you continue it into a multi-Ch. fic(regardless of length)?
peace with the world chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
nice. but each quote gets its wn paragraph. makes it easyer to rread and such. i hope you continue, but why is it labled complete?
ISurvivedHurricaneIrma chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
A great story. Very well written.
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