|Reviews for Burning Starfire|
| KHB123 chapter 8 . 8/15/2017
I have been reading all the Bakura stories and now all "The Pendulum Swings" universe series, and let me just say I have become a huge fan of this saga. I love the character development, the familial relationships, the categorial drama, the humor, and the adventure behind all of them. I sincerely wish Yami Bakura had come back like this and was given a chance of redemption with his former host, Ryou, because the possibility was just screaming out there, but it was never given the chance, which made it all the more disappointing for the Yu-Gi-Oh series. I'm still hoping that since they're continuously making different types of Yu-Gi-Oh series, they could still make it happen. Ten or twenty years in our reality is no more than a few years in theirs anyway.
Anyway, like the others, I am sucked into this adventure with the Bakuras, watching further character development, including the clear tension between Yami and Bakura's father, the twists, the wit, and the suspense. I'm shocked that it has been put off for this long without being finished, so I'm begging you to please finish it. I love learning about what happens next and something tells me they have yet to face the worst, but only you can make it happen.
Please finish it! And I encourage more Bakura "Pendulum" stories, even one-shots, if possible. They are so much fun to read!
| Evilkitten3 chapter 8 . 5/25/2016
The interactions between Yami Bakura and Thistle are priceless. XD
| Evilkitten3 chapter 7 . 5/25/2016
These are some of the angriest trees I've ever heard of. XD
| Evilkitten3 chapter 4 . 5/25/2016
...I don't think Yami Bakura has the right to complain about theft, really...
| Mariklover222 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Yami Marik keeps coming back
| EtheralGirl chapter 8 . 4/13/2011
Great story! Will there be another chapter?
| Affy-Bakura chapter 8 . 8/15/2010
:D This story is epic!
XD Ryou is so cute with his "oh my" and "Great Scott!"
| sarcasticrocker86 chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Crapinabucket hello again, Yami Marik!
Oh, the artistry of your weaving together of fics in your first chapters...
You've started this off wonderfully. Just enough mystery with just enough humor with just enough drama. Sorry to see this hasn't yet been completed yet, not to worry. There will be no pestering from me this time. I will just read this very, very slowly and patiently await an update...
Still, excellent job so far.
| Rehema chapter 8 . 7/27/2010
This is very well done! It flows very smoothly, esp. being a fantasy post series, and everything makes sense up to this point!
Um, not to be too nit-picky or rude or anything (please don't be offended!), but I noticed you used the word "growled" quite a lot with TKB... and "grumped" too, but a little less.
Please update soon!
| Ryou VeRua chapter 8 . 6/4/2010
Again with the same universe, eh? And you seem to love using Yami Marik as a villain - not that I disagree with the choice! He's so deliciously evil.
This is definitely different though, a fantasy setting that keeps with the YGO plot line! You've done a great job with it so far and I hope you keep it up.
| ryoulover911 chapter 7 . 3/15/2010
Ok, before i go any farther, I wnat to put in my guess: I think that this Fafnir guy IS Yami Marik... Just a guess.
| BlackRitual chapter 8 . 3/14/2010
O.O Never read the "stalker" part of this chapter while listening to creepy music. BR! Shivers...
XD Somehow, Yami Bakura gestering up with his hands to mime Yami Marik's hair stuck a chord with my sense of humor...
| Chibi Cheesecake chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
Ooh, I really like how this chapter raises suspicions about everything that's happened so far. It really is like a strange RPG that they've been thrown into. o.o
I like the appearance of Volker. And ooh, that's bad news that Yami M is running around in plain sight causing trouble... I'm looking forward to them meeting Adelpha, though!
| Harry2 chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
Sounds to me that Yami Merrick is playing games with the travelers. And we know what he wants: THE DESTRUCTION OF YAMI BAKURA!
| NortheasternWind chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
Unskilled ninja is unskilled.
If I was walking in the forest and randomly saw a skeletal hand sticking out, I would scream and run T_T Man, imagine getting tangled up and dying of hunger and thirst in a forest like that...
Maybe it's a fairy tale, and you have to do what the Drosselmeyer- I mean, storyteller says! That would be annoying, and upsetting, that someone would want to watch you go through hell and back physically and psychologically for entertainment, but that's kinda what we do XD;
*snerks* Volker. I'm seeing a mix of... what looks like Robin Hood and Rambo o.0 Combined with one Volke's assassin wear. He looks pretty tough in my head.
Yami Marik is definitely doing this on purpose! Framing Yami...
But yay, now we get to meet La Resistance!