Reviews for Burning Starfire
Mariklover222 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Yami Marik keeps coming back
EtheralGirl chapter 8 . 4/13/2011
Great story! Will there be another chapter?
Affy-Bakura chapter 8 . 8/15/2010
:D This story is epic!

XD Ryou is so cute with his "oh my" and "Great Scott!"

Keep going!
sarcasticrocker86 chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Crapinabucket hello again, Yami Marik!

Oh, the artistry of your weaving together of fics in your first chapters...

You've started this off wonderfully. Just enough mystery with just enough humor with just enough drama. Sorry to see this hasn't yet been completed yet, not to worry. There will be no pestering from me this time. I will just read this very, very slowly and patiently await an update...

Still, excellent job so far.
Rehema chapter 8 . 7/27/2010
This is very well done! It flows very smoothly, esp. being a fantasy post series, and everything makes sense up to this point!

Um, not to be too nit-picky or rude or anything (please don't be offended!), but I noticed you used the word "growled" quite a lot with TKB... and "grumped" too, but a little less.

Please update soon!
Ryou VeRua chapter 8 . 6/4/2010
Again with the same universe, eh? And you seem to love using Yami Marik as a villain - not that I disagree with the choice! He's so deliciously evil.

This is definitely different though, a fantasy setting that keeps with the YGO plot line! You've done a great job with it so far and I hope you keep it up.
ryoulover911 chapter 7 . 3/15/2010
Ok, before i go any farther, I wnat to put in my guess: I think that this Fafnir guy IS Yami Marik... Just a guess.

Moveing on
BlackRitual chapter 8 . 3/14/2010
O.O Never read the "stalker" part of this chapter while listening to creepy music. BR! Shivers...

XD Somehow, Yami Bakura gestering up with his hands to mime Yami Marik's hair stuck a chord with my sense of humor...
Chibi Cheesecake chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
Ooh, I really like how this chapter raises suspicions about everything that's happened so far. It really is like a strange RPG that they've been thrown into. o.o

I like the appearance of Volker. And ooh, that's bad news that Yami M is running around in plain sight causing trouble... I'm looking forward to them meeting Adelpha, though!
Harry2 chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
Sounds to me that Yami Merrick is playing games with the travelers. And we know what he wants: THE DESTRUCTION OF YAMI BAKURA!
NortheasternWind chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
Unskilled ninja is unskilled.

If I was walking in the forest and randomly saw a skeletal hand sticking out, I would scream and run T_T Man, imagine getting tangled up and dying of hunger and thirst in a forest like that...

Maybe it's a fairy tale, and you have to do what the Drosselmeyer- I mean, storyteller says! That would be annoying, and upsetting, that someone would want to watch you go through hell and back physically and psychologically for entertainment, but that's kinda what we do XD;

*snerks* Volker. I'm seeing a mix of... what looks like Robin Hood and Rambo o.0 Combined with one Volke's assassin wear. He looks pretty tough in my head.

Yami Marik is definitely doing this on purpose! Framing Yami...

But yay, now we get to meet La Resistance!
Mahersal chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
Hm. I wonder what Yami Marik has planned.

I love this story! It's so good and is such a creative idea! YAY for new chappies!
chibi heishi chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
Jeez, nothing is adding up in this world - unless it's to the fact that, as they said, they're being played. I think I'd be breaking completely away at this point. As much as I'd want to get home, I'd definitely be taking the time to 'wander' off the path and talk to people that I was NOT being directed towards, see if I could find out what the (*%'s actually going on.

Also, Ryou redeemed himself just a bit in the last paragraph or two. I was really starting to get annoyed with the boy - hoping for the best is one thing, but you'd think he'd have learned at least a LITTLE suspicion after all the times he's been manipulated. And the constant rephrasing of what others said was grating on the nerves. Hopefully he'll snap out of it soon - before I'm tempted to smack him. He's cute and fluffy, but that'll only buy him so much time.
YamiBakura1988 chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
good chapter
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 8 . 3/12/2010
I like the North Star parallel mention-very poetic.

And eep! Being followed in a creepy forest definitely not good.

Thistle's mention about what the skeleton arm could be is utterly creepy.

I like the role-playing comment, though-an interesting element, and one that both Bakuras can relate to...

Yami Bakura talking to the "foliage" LOL And eep at him getting mistaken for Yami M.

Ooh, I love the names you choose for the Juno characters. They definitely add to the atmosphere. And things like "fifth village," too...

Definitely looking forward to more!
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