Reviews for Shadows I: Sorcerer's Stone
magi chapter 5 . 6/9/2014
i think it is pretty good i can't wait for the next chapter
naruto and twilight fan33 chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
sunhex1120 chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
Hope u edit soon
Agrond chapter 5 . 3/28/2013
I hope you don't have deserted this story's writing, it was very interesting! Even if I have an idea about which bond there is between Harry and Narati (and between Naruto, the mysterious Arashi and the sealed man), I want that this story continue, so I'll know if I was right and if the others children will go to Hogward for the second year.
ten195 chapter 4 . 3/4/2013
ok i have another question with the pairings and that's with ginny!? even though draco needs to get his butt kick, it would b so cool if ginny n draco get together after draco gets over his pompous attitiude i think this can be a really cool pairing
ten195 chapter 5 . 2/17/2013
This story is awesome n the pairing r cute . R Yu going to let hinata continue to at least learn ninja moves n jutus i wud love to see her kick draco butt ninja style
deidara-chan's lover214 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
I like really like your story! However, I think you gave your oc too much of a part in this so it takes a lot away from the story. You have some major grammar issues but other than that you did a great job!
Melantha4 chapter 5 . 10/1/2012
i thought hinata would never see naruto and what's-her-name
Lucyole chapter 5 . 7/10/2012
wow your story is really interesting and sweet too because ooh hina and
harry they are sxo cute togehter all the blushing kawaii, please write
more chapter i would be very happy to read them hina is the
best and the backround story of them all is so sad but
fascinating i assume that harry and naratii are twins
in reallytiy but she doenst inerit the magic of her parents
but who is the father of hinata (bad thought that it is james too)
but i hope not that would be awful for lilly and the upcoming
couple harry and hinata.
please write as fast as you can or upload just give us more
chapters to read
Raven of the black forest chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Hi! Just thought I'd correct you,

"since he wanted to immitate his hero the Yondaime (Fourth Hokage)."

The correct way of saying this would be:

"since he wanted to immitate his hero the Yondaime (Fourth) Hokage."

'yondaime' means fourth. This could be Yondaime Hokage (fire shadow), Yondaime Mizukage (mist shadow), or even Yondaime Otokage (I THINK it means 'sound shadow'. It's whatever the hell orochimaru is.).

Sorry if I sound like I'm criticizing you, I'm just a perfectionist with canon details. Again, Sorry.

RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga chapter 5 . 4/6/2012
lol i love this story please update when you get the chance to please.
Yuuki Heartfilia-Dragneel chapter 5 . 3/5/2012
wow interesting hope u update soon
M chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
But they see her again in the next chapter! O.o
ArtisticAngel6 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
This is an awesome story plz plz continue
Garbouw Deark chapter 5 . 7/25/2011
Yay! Update soon.
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