|Reviews for Where's Papa?|
| thefalseblonde chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
I really liked how you used the prologue of the movie! But, I think in the movie, the dog's name was Toby. That doesn't matter. All that matters is that your story was VERY good! :-)
| Celestial Rainstorm chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
This was awesome, except for a few things:
-The little dog's name was Toby, not Ted
-Jo was asleep when the twister hit, and her mother got her
-The father kept saying, "I can't hold it any longer!" Not "I love you." It would be awesome if he had, though!
| Cindersfall chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
So sad :( I just watched Twister again a few days ago and really hated what happened there. Great job on writing! I liked it.
| Sakurablossom chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
this is pretty good a few minor errors like the dogs name was "Toby" not Ted and they weren't eating ice cream either in the movie but other than that it's pretty good!