Reviews for Our Secret Mission
Brock's Geodude chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
Maya was 17 when they first met, not 16, but this is cute. :)
almondlife chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
Aw man. Different perspectives where you can compare how they see the world slightly differently is my favorite literary thing. And the relationship has problems and they're addressed and ugh I'm so in love with the way you write these two. Thank you!
boop chapter 7 . 6/7/2014
this was great. maya's characterization was perfect and this is how you do angst right.

but one question: did maya miscarry? or was a it a false positive?
WildfireDreams chapter 14 . 12/20/2013
_ Awesome story, I actually found it through the fanart XD
Valiant No More chapter 14 . 2/19/2012
This story was beautiful and the picture is too. Unfortunately I'm not a deviantart member so I could let the artist know, but you are both amazing, and I love you for it! :) keep up the amazing work!
BlazingCobaltX chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
This story is like my first love. I've read it a year or two ago and I still remember it! This fic was my first one and it brought me into fanfiction, and I'm thankfull for it.
RiddikulusGrin chapter 8 . 12/2/2010
some big inconsistancies in this chapter. Phoenix DOES know who Shadi Smith is. Shadi tells him he's actually Zac when he hads over the performance rights letter for Nick to give to Trucy. Also, Apollo and Trucy shouldn't know eachother meets her as a ? when she hads him the card during the trial break, but he only starts investigating with her during the second case.

Sorry if someone's already pointed this out.
ChaiLatteProd chapter 14 . 11/12/2010
This is a good story. A decent sized short story. I'm not really into love stories and believe me, the first chapter screamed "LOVE!" but there is just the way you write in their different perspectives and describe their adventures makes me want to read more. I can't help it. I normally shun stories like these but yours is just really special.
Turnip the Scribe chapter 13 . 7/20/2010
Edgey doesn't need a restraining order against Oldbag.

He has Franziska. I pity the foolish fool who foolishly clings to her boy-toy.
PWadventure chapter 13 . 7/15/2010
This is the first of your stories that I read and I have to say that it is simply amazing. I can't imagine a better story about the Maya / Phoenix pairing in the time after T&T until AJ. It was very emotional, nearly all the time believable (very few things were maybe a little over the top like the "Kurain Trial") and the characters very excellent written (I can imagine them acting that way). What I liked the most were the wonderful connections you made to nearly all games, you included fantastically the plot from the games and details in your own story and created something that should make every Ace Attorney fan happy (specially if the are Maya / Phoenix fans).

Besides the main characters Maya and Phoenix I found Apollo and Trucy hilarious, and I just read that your other favorite pairings are Apollo / Vera and Edgeworth / Franziska. I would say that these are also my favorite pairings (with Klavier / Ema and maybe innocent Apollo / Trucy), so I am looking forward to read you other stories (particularly the ones connected with this).

Well, thats all ... in summary I just wanted to say that "Our Secret Mission" was great and that it is without a doubt my favorite Phoenix / Maya fanfiction ... and sorry, my Englisch isn't perfect.
Superjay45 chapter 14 . 7/1/2010
CR at the top

"I can't believe its not cannon"

Very good, love it
pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Aww! So sweet! Nice start! I'll have to read the rest later!
candleclouds chapter 14 . 5/14/2010
Your story is pure win. This should be canon. ;)

Seriously, this was a much better ending than what they tacked on to the end of the ace attorney series (namely, AJ, even though I still like it) and I adored your characterization!

Thanks so much for this amazing story.
Fanficaddict12 chapter 14 . 5/11/2010
I saw it too. :D It was a really great peice.

I'd like to see the prequel, but I'm a little afraid since I don't like yaoi. :C
Three Graces chapter 13 . 5/5/2010
'Relationship snails' I LOVE that xD
The concept to this story is lovely and just what I had envisioned Nick and Maya would do.

I love it : )
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