Reviews for The Heiress of Lord Henry More |
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![]() ![]() Hi! Just remembered about this lovely story. Been some time since updated, any news when can this be finished? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you and your family are well after all this time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY SHIT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Renee is UNHINGED! |
![]() ![]() ![]() girl i need you to tell me if you are gonna finish this story :( it is my favorite but i dont know if there is still hope. love your writing and the character development is cheff kiss |
![]() ![]() This story is garbage. I must have been out of mind because I continued reading. Sorry if it may seem harsh, but that's what I feel about this story. And I feel pretty strongly pissed off about it because I am actually writing a review about how much I hated it. |
![]() ![]() Great beginning. So far there is just enough disdain for Edward that makes me want to keep reading. Interested to see what happens with Henry and Bella. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have stated several times that English is not your native language - that you find it difficult to write in English. I have read quite a few Fan Fiction stories and I can usually tell if the author’s native language is not English. Idioms are often the give away No one would realize, by your writing style, that it is not your first language. You should be proud of the accomplishment of being able to write as well as a native speaker if not better! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, fingers crossed you upload the final chapters soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this fuc, you know as an individual if you read something and it invokes feelings within you, then you know it's good... Bella pisses me off like nobody's business, she's a hypocrite and her indesisiveness is borderline toxic, I can understand going through traumatic experiences in life but gosh why must you pull everyone else with you when you go under... I hate how she's being holy holy, like she's freaking perfect, her stubbornness is just beyond annoying... She's a know it all whom hates to be wrong even though she can see how wrong she is... And the way she's treating Edward, no just hell no... If you cannot fix yourself don't include other people in your mess atleast that's my philosophy... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sure am missing this story! I hope everything is well with you and you come back to us soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy Fuckk! Woah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it weird that I hate Renee? |
![]() ![]() Any chance this will be completed? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, thank you for sharing! |