Reviews for At the Bar
Charlee56 chapter 20 . 2/20
Not: "Dido.
Is: "DiTTo".
Not:"Ease drop".
Is: "Eavesdrop".
Get... It... RIGHT!
Otherwie? A brilliant story. AND for Adults.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I think Daedalus's name at camp was Quintus?
kjgf chapter 17 . 10/23/2014
short
Guest chapter 2 . 9/7/2014
Um... Annabeth would NEVER become a striper. Her "fatal flaw" was she was too proud you cant just make her be a striper and then just pretend like its still annabeth
AnnabethChaseRulez chapter 36 . 7/26/2014
Love the plot line for this story and how it has been going. Great way on doing the wedding BTW. Oh and I know that it may have been a while since you had even a single thought about this book but curiosity has got the best of me and I really want to know what happens aftr their wedding. Do they start a family? Does Annabeth get a better job? Do they find Annabeth's Step-mum and Step-brothers? I understand if you don't feel like writing this story though considering that some people actually do have a life they live. Keep up the writing even if its not this exact story.
shiznit777 chapter 15 . 7/11/2014
By any chance do u actually know a micheal Riggs? Maybe w dirty blonde/brown hair w glasses?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
U should have made percy the stripper because annabeth is a daughter of Athena and could get a job that dosent require sex with people she dosent know and all that
Victoria Jackson chapter 16 . 5/4/2014
This chapter is one of my favorite and the button does sing I love how you made Percy the over protective brother type
Tank chapter 36 . 5/1/2014
So are you ever going to make a sequel. I've re read this story numerous times and I deem to inform you that it needs more. I need more. I'd love to see the continuation you are a superb writer and this is by far the best story I've seen on this site since I joined it six years ago.
loversxwriterx chapter 31 . 3/31/2014
Me! U got me thinkin bout french fries! Dern you!
loversxwriterx chapter 21 . 3/31/2014
was merediith raped?
loversxwriterx chapter 18 . 3/31/2014
I was about to put my straw into my juice box when I read it I was like what the heck?! CREEPY
loversxwriterx chapter 4 . 3/30/2014
Its weird reading Annabeth as a stripper, wanna really leaen her story! I like it though just a bit akward.
TheSadisticDaughterOfHades chapter 36 . 2/2/2014
You had nearly every PJ couple I ship in there except Tratie! I love this though Annabeth was a bit of a pain.
JacksonTwinGirl chapter 27 . 1/5/2014
Seriously twighlight breaking dawn?you never cease to amaze me
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