|Reviews for The Great Escape|
| PsychoticSushi chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
ha! this is pretty good! ha i was lookin for clerks fanfics for EVER..it never occured to me it might be in Kevin Smith, i never saw it on the list!
haha but anyway..i think you should definitely continue. it seems really good! the guy who commented before me...well, he's kinda right. the summary isn't THAT bad, though. But i DO agree you need just a bit more language.
On the other hand, there wasn't many comments in this chapp that needed cussing anyway, and you don't want every other word in a sentence to be a swear, so i get that.
if you update, i'll be reading it! :)
| Matt The Muse chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Well, to be honest your summary was god awful. But this is not a subpar fanfic, I think you need to revise, just a little bit more, make the chapters longer update fast and constant, and I'll be here to read. Also this story needs a teensie bit more vulgarity. Assuming that we are posting in the Kevin Smith forum. Again not that bad.