Reviews for Way Things Should Be
Bev beltz chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
I really enjoyed this fan fic .i did not know how it would end .it was very good .
khazrn43 chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
I know you wrote this long ago, but if you are still here I'd like to say this was so perfect. Having gone through a miscarriage myself it hit extremely close to home. But as always Finchel prevails
Honor the tether! Remember the drummer!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Aww poor Finn, that scene in the nursery really did it for me! And poor Rachel too! But glad this story has a happy ending.
coffeehelps chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
This was so sweet and sad. My heart broke for Finn and Rachel when they lost their first baby, but I'm so glad that they got to have a happy ending. Great job!
Angel Eyed Vampire chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
That was the most intense, beautiful writing I've read in ages!
gLeekerSeeker chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
This was stunning. I absolutely loved this story. I felt for Finn when he was upset and I whooped for joy when little Evie was born. And I will admit I laughed when the name 'Sunshine Schue' was thought up by Finn.

If I had to give this a grade it would be A! Haha, this story is one those very rare, very special story that marks you for ever. I can guantee that I will always remember this story! Thank you for writing this work of art. Bravo!
SingMaddi chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Wow that was such an amazing story , I really felt for Finn towards the end , you should write another finchel future fan fic :)
a little duckling chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Omygosh... This is... So amazing. I cannot even find words to describe how beautifully written and how moving this story really is.

I can't believe a hadn't found it before! You are an amazing Finchel author. I loved Finn so much in this story :)
victoriaseve chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
That really was one of the most beautiful (short) stories I've ever read (:
RockerPrincess83 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
This story was simply amazing! It went through all these emotions and the writing was fantastic. You did a great job :)
Eomyn chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
This is so beautiful!

I never lived through it (and I hope I never do), but my work brought me around women who were in possibly the same situation. The last I remember wasn't at five months yet, but that's not the worst. We brought her to the hospital, and she was all alone.

Grief comes along in so many different ways. And a grief like that isn't sopmething you should go through on your own. That's why they're still so blessed. They aren't alone.
TheUnderstatement chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
I actually love this story for two reasons:

One, because it's beautifully written, soul tearing and heart warming.

Two, because my name is Evelyn, Evie for short.

egyouppt chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
The pain for them is so palpable and so incredible. I love how there's an intense moment, a potential falling out, but they both love each other and need each other too much to let go. And I LOVE the way you show how to get to a happy ending, or a happier ending, it's not an easy route. This is beautiful.
MaroonFox chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
This is so beautiful. I love the erotic scene between them at the start and how they go through this heartbreaking journey with the first pregnancy only to be blessed later. Ugh love!
LeahAnne chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Awh... that was so awesome it made me cry!

As someone who's had two miscarriages, it really made me sad, but happy at the same time, especially for Finn!

There was so much tension and romance and hurt and grief and triumph... it was amazing!

Thank you for writing such a great story. :)
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