|Reviews for Over the Horizon|
| TKH Springer chapter 10 . 1/19
What a great story. Enjoyed it very much. Will ther be more?
| ken chapter 10 . 11/24/2017
I wish you would finish this story
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/3/2017
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/23/2017
| Shepard131 chapter 7 . 6/3/2017
good story so far, but there is no way that the colonials would speak english. they would likely speak some bastardised greek/Latin hybrid.
| CrazedGammaMan1721 chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
400th Review Baby
| Jorge chapter 8 . 1/8/2017
Sorry, but it's just way too dumb that they would speak the same language. What if it was Mexicans that went to Kobol?
| orionastro chapter 10 . 10/8/2016
very good story so far , i hope That the Odyssey and the Daedalus appear ,and destroy those base ships, and i hope Earth stops the Colonial Holocaust , revealing the faulty CPN , so that the Colonials can disconnect ,and face the damned Cylons head on and defeat them . Cant hardly wait for the next chapters .
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/11/2016
This is a h*ll of a place to cliff us.
| Umbra.Venator chapter 10 . 9/10/2016
interesting story, man issue was that Anthem was a bit inconsistent, after Athena told him and Daniel the history of the 13 tribes, he still acts like the Colonial version of the exodus was fact, insisting Kobol was the Human homeworld even though she stated that they took the Colonial's ancestors from Earth before the genetic reshuffle, granted she called it by the Ancients name for Earth but still you'd think Daniel would told him that.
All in all a good story just needed a bit more character refinement on Anthem :)
| Chris chapter 4 . 12/18/2015
I don't know if I have said this before, but this story is too long winded, you are explaining too much, you need to work on your pacing.
Other then that it is quite well written, no spelling mistakes or context errors that I could see.
| Arthorius chapter 10 . 12/6/2015
You need to learn to complete and finish your storylines, if this was real world publishing, you be kicked out of the door with lawyers pounding on your body for money you owe... 3 abandon storylines gives you bad rep and being part of a large group of writers who have abandon storylines and never completes them...
| Hastur chapter 10 . 11/24/2015
Is this ever going to get updated? It's very promising, but has been abandoned for a long time - bit disappointing, that.
| jag389 chapter 10 . 9/2/2015
another good story. hope you go back to writing one day. like all the stories you have written. best wishes.
| Difdi chapter 8 . 8/6/2015
You have a serious error in this chapter.
Why would Adama not know what a PhD is, when the Colonies use that letter arrangement for doctors? Doctor Cyrus used those same letters when identifying himself at the checkpoint to enter the Sunken Palace in an earlier chapter.