|Reviews for Sweet music|
| Jean Cooper chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
lol. Just lol. A wonderful little piece of humor. I commend you for this. Good luck in the contest.
| Mage the Observer chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Entry Verified. It follows a good narrative, but I think the sentence structure could use a little work. Maybe it's just a lack of commas, but it feels like there are a few run-on sentences in there.
Ah well, that's just nitpicking on my part. Good luck in the contest!